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Sorry, but you need to work on your English.

I like the story and it made me teary-eyed...T_T
but a little more reviews on your gammar m'kay? :)

Seriously after I read this I cried like literally, very well done story(:

my heart just broke a bit ;A;
Although I would have felt the story a bit better if there hadn't been verb confusions and grammar mistakes (:

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A beautifull story but you need a profread. it is a little sad but I like how you made this story in that way that it is not too, you know with too much grieve and curses.
I would have liked if GOM have also appeared. I also understand that you only wanted to incarnate Seirin team and how they reacted.
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I like the story super sad though :( you should right about, when the GOM herd about kuroko illness

Kuroko iAi sniff sniff

you are in dire need of a beta reader. The idea itself is not half bad execution is poor. The poor grammar ain't helping either. Please continue to try and improve yourself with the help of beta reader.

Momentos cursies con una música cursie y temperamento bipolar no ayudaron con esta historia que me hizo llorar...Mejor dicho hicieron un reguero de lagrimas incontenibles xd
Te quedó hermoso,mil felicidades.

Moments cursies with silly music and bipolar temperament did not help with this story that made me mourn ... rather made a trail of tears uncontrollable xd
I was beautiful, a thousand congratulations.

wow.. this is could get a good score for a first fanfic in kurobasu fandom.. I like it..
I like the idea and how you write it..

But I think it'll be better if you try to portray how the seirin teams reaction and feelings too and not only just kagami :)

its sooo sad, poor kuro-chan T.T but I like it :) can you wirte about the GoM how they feel when they hear that kuro-chan died? (sorry about my bad english :) )