| Reviews for The Yule Ball |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 1/19 Vh |
| Harmony chapter 5 . 7/7/2019 Amazing any more |
| Harmony chapter 4 . 7/7/2019 Should of danced more harry Ahh sht things growing down Ana was Sirius an easter egg or just put there |
| Harmony chapter 3 . 7/3/2019 Notbad not bad |
| Harmony chapter 2 . 7/3/2019 Nice easter egg with fantastic beast and were to find them Love this chapter Through the last few lines could have been extended |
| Harmony chapter 1 . 7/2/2019 K not much too comet on But goog |
| Guest chapter 5 . 5/29/2019 Amazing story line but dull ending |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/21/2019 quotation marks exist. |
| Hmmmm chapter 5 . 11/23/2018 Quite inconsistent. Almost as if you’re pressing your foot violently down on the accelerator then hitting the brake over and over. The ending was also a bit rushed and could’ve been nicer. |
 Eternal Downfall chapter 5 . 5/4/2013 I once was blind but now I see. A line from Nick Cave and the Bad Seeds' 'O' Children' from the harmony dance scene in film 7. Was that intentional? |
| ChittiRobo chapter 1 . 1/22/2013 Man, do use some quotes, they are better than dashes. |
| nikyta chapter 5 . 1/22/2013 love itttttttttttt |
| pawsrule chapter 5 . 1/21/2013 Very nice story! Hope you write more harmony stories. |
| starboy454 chapter 5 . 1/21/2013 good ending |
| racethom chapter 4 . 1/21/2013 Your English is not perfect but it is much better than many of the fan fics written by people whose first language is English. I think you deserve a round of applause for a job well done :) |
