| Reviews for The Mistakes That He Made |
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   Garota Nerd chapter 38 . 5/24 This is brilliant! Absolutely brilliant! I hope you will finish updating one day, stories like this show so much potential as a writer! I really hope you will update again someday. |
| REQUIEMC chapter 38 . 2/19 where's the epilogue? |
| Guest chapter 38 . 11/1/2019 Then y don't u release the epilogue already! I read it a long time ago and want to reread it again and ur last author msg really hyped my hope :) Plzzz come back and finish it. It's soo nice since u wanna do it too(even tho it's been a long time) still come back. I ll look forward to it :) |
| Little Buster chapter 29 . 8/26/2019 Got to chapter 29 and don't like this story anymore. It was interesting up to the beginning of war. I just don't like how soon it started and how rushed it all is. Every chapter has grammar error, which further decreases the quality of this story. |
| ObitoUchiha0508 chapter 5 . 7/22/2019 Obito is slipping. She's starting to unravel the mystery of who he is with those dropped hints. Of course she doesn't think he's Obito but it won't take her long to consider it a possibility at this rate. |
| ObitoUchiha0508 chapter 4 . 7/22/2019 Why would Pain wait to accept his offer? When Pain was born, Nagato was already Obito's bitch. I think you meant Nagato. Yahiko has to die before Nagato considers Obito's offer. |
| ObitoUchiha0508 chapter 3 . 7/22/2019 Nice plot twist. Why Rin was there, when only Anbu were considered for that position, I'll never know. Looks like Obito will have to modify his plans if he wishes to complete the eye of the moon. |
| ObitoUchiha0508 chapter 2 . 7/22/2019 Why didn't Rin attack the village? She had the 3 tails sealed in her and it was set to attack the village as soon as she stepped foot in it. Well, at least with the 3 tails she won't be so useless. |
| ObitoUchiha0508 chapter 1 . 7/22/2019 I'm always up for a long Obito time travel fic but I have one reservation, ObiRin. I don't like this pairing at all. Obito deserves better. I'd prefer him with OCs than a useless, nobody like Rin. |
| lol123 chapter 38 . 7/20/2018 Good story, sad that you didn't finish it. |
| Guest chapter 38 . 1/14/2018 Then y don't u update them ? |
| JawaSolo chapter 38 . 11/13/2017 Probably, you will not continue this story but I would be grateful if you add epilogue if it's written. (My English sucks, I know XD) |
| Langas chapter 38 . 9/14/2017 Please continue this story. It is amazing and enjoyable |
| King of fans chapter 2 . 9/2/2017 So dose rin have the 3 tails? |
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/30/2017 I believe , about the afterlife thing, that the living are simply unable to comprehend the afterlife. They simply can't remember even going there, what they did once they are in the living world. Or something like that |
