Brilliant idea and thanks for writing as I enjoyed reading this story. I liked how you wrote the relationship between Alex and Olivia.

QAfter this session of love making which was written so well the two of them are almost becoming one.

I could not see Olivia or Alex wanting to be apart they have become so close. Olivia itts able to bring Alex out of flash backs particularly if it’s sexual because Alex Still feels Jess’s control her and in small ways can I come down or leave the bed. It will take a weeks for Liv to recondition her. On the opposite Alex Who is able to talk or touch Liv out of her anger cloud.

So it makes sense for Liv to move in on various levels all of the above and of corse Liv would have no rent to pay and we know she hates the fact that Alex has paid for her treatment. Liv was only happy when she set up the payment plan- Little does she know it’s going into her own fund!

So will she say yes? They don’t seem to be apart much of like being apart. Again you leave us on a cliffhanger - oh Alex will be so upset and feel rejected if Liv says no.

Fantastic huge Kudos from the U.K.

Mx

This has been a truly amazing fiction I still don’t know how I missed it.

There are so many emotions from empathy, angst, anger, hate, and love and each one has been written so well.

I love AU as I said before your able to produce something big this level, so professional and it flows so we’ll.

We finally see Olivia show Alex what real love is after the hell she has been through which has been pure hell at the hands of Jess.

Jess May feel smug now but with all the evidence against her what she did was beyond cruel but it will hit where her life is going. She’s putting smug look until she saw Alex and she wasn’t breaking on the stand.

Now once trial is over they can really start to heal. Jess can rot In jail.

This has been put together so well the plot the feelings the whole fiction rolls so well utterly brilliant and I’m gland I’ve found it.

Huge Kudos from the U.K.

Mx

Well I’m not sure how I have missed this fiction - I go back looking for AO and personally prefer AU it opens up so many more avenues.

This has been wonderfully written un-rushed full of so many emotions. Especially showing how they look after their own.

Poor Alex is terrified and even Fin is surprised to the extent of it this woman to do so much damage to Alex and nobody notice is truly amazing how does one function with a broken arm and keep it quiet. She really is a sadistic bitch but I really don’t think she knows what’s she’s taken on - if it was her who shot Liv it doesn’t bode well for her.

The mysterious girlfriend that nobody knows about could be a ploy by Jess to see how bad Liv is or maybe finish the job after all Alex could have told her about Elliot. It would all fit together especially with her comment of I’m not surprised your allowed in. I do think she has something with Jess some way or. another.
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Mx

Apparently I have read and commented on this story before, so the would not let me post this comment on the last chapter. Because of the way this story has it my heart I had to comment on it again. For that reason I have gone back a couple of chapters to post my comment.

This is an incredible story showing how love heals, how it can strengthen you, and most importantly how the bond of love can make you whole. Both Olivia and Alex had so much to overcome. So much that it could crush them individually. However, when they relied on their other half they discovered how strong they where together. They overcame the impossible because the bonds of true love are the strongest thing in this world.

I thought I had found my other half and after almost 15 years together she told me she wasn't and it is the most difficult thing I have ever faced. It is stories like this that remind me that it is still out there and worth seeking out and fighting for. So thank you for putting your heart and soul into this story. It reminds me to keep looking because this kind of bond is worth it. I look forward to reading more of you works.

Thank you for this creative,complex story.

I love this story. It is sooooo good that this is the second time I have read it. That is why I am posting it here, can't post it on the last chapter cause I already did. I am also a little sad to see it end but over joyed for the happily ever after, our girls deserve it.

I love this story. just finished it and as always it is perfect

this jess person shall rot in the bowels of tarturys for what she has Alex through. I have never hated a character more then I do right now

Love it. Although I would not have minded seeing some more of the family time.

I love Patricia Cornwell! I didn't know that about "Bones." I'll have to look up the other books you mentioned. They sound interesting.

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One thing that would have given us all closure was Jess being brutally raped in prison on a regular basis, then getting the shut beat out of her (while becoming someone's bitch), then hating shanked in prison and dying a very slow, painful death! While the dr lopped off parts of her body from sepsis or something like that!'

Loved and hated this story...I love Alex and the thought of what she endured I'm your story was horiffic! Thanks for the hard work. Lisa

Great story. In Australia there is a Royal Commission on Domestic Violence. The first witness' testimony mirrored Alex story. This made your story even more powerful to me. The police experience a whole side of life, most of us thankfully never see. Special people make great cops. I hope that people who read this story believe it can get better. The current Australian of the year is the most amazing woman. She was a victim of horrendous domestic violence. Because of her, the Royal Commission will see change in Australia. I hope it is soon enough for those sufferring

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