I really enjoyed this story so far, and can't wait for the next installment. Keep up the good work!

You need to have this under just YUFFIE not YUFFIE and CLOUD...so misleading!

I honestly have no idea if it was the OC narrating this but if it was, you have to watch out. Just remember to not make this novelisation ALL about the OC and you should be fine.

I'm watching you.*shifty eyes*