| Reviews for Keibatsu |
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willam and jack and jake chapter 43 . 6/6 nice wells done |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/25 this is horrible |
MojoBlack chapter 43 . 5/23 Well done so far hope you get to finish. |
MojoBlack chapter 30 . 5/22 This story is epic man Im very impressed. This AU is very compelling and not just a new story for the hell of it. Btw the naruhina moments are very genuine. |
PraetorXyn chapter 43 . 5/11 I've just binged this, lots to unpack here. Firstly, I've never liked kitsunehanyouyokai Naruto, primarily because I'm very clan centric and since he's basically the last of his clan that means his children will be too. It also makes him what Konoha always thought he was. Secondly, I don't really like single pairing stories either. They make little sense with a character as selfless, confident but humble, nice, powerful cheerful etc as Naruto is. The only way a single pairing story is remotely realistic is when multiple girls fight over him and he ends up picking one and trying to appease the others, which unfortunately is what it looks like Sealed Legacy is doing. Even then, considering he's the last h heir to probably the greatest clan that ever lived feat wise, and it's just projecting modern monogamy into a situation where it makes no sense. That being said, the premise of this story was unique and compelling enough I couldn't drop it despite my differing preferences. It's overall been very well done, if the pacing a tad slow. The only real problem I have with the plot at this point is the edo tensei deus ex machina. The writing of Minato's downward spiral was so perfect up to that point, if him beating Itachi by barely doing anything wasn't silly. The Uzumaki being so ignorant of the Edo Tensei doesn't make much sense considering their ties to the Senju clan and Kushina being Orochimaru's student. Realistically the writing would have been perfect if they just sealed every edo tensei at once with some secret Uzumaki art and thus crushed Minato's Trump card all at once, thus letting him mentally snap. I'll keep reading, but honestly I'm losing interest if this is going to take much longer. Wave was a perfect time to if not end things set up the final climactic showdown between the Uzumaki and Minato. Him forcing a retreat with Edo Tensei and going on to commit genocide multiple times just seems like jumping the shark to pad out length. Especially if there's going to be an Akatsuki arc... because I don't at all care about them in this story. |
Nightshadegirl chapter 43 . 5/4 highly doubt sasuke will win the showdown. i hope tenten's father talks some sense into that girl's head or she will be a lost cause. |
246vili chapter 43 . 5/3 Thx for the update. Looking forward to the fight between Kramamaru and Sasuke. Keep up the good work. |
SilentSinger948 chapter 43 . 5/2 Glad to see this story updated. It's been so long. Hope the next chapter comes out sooner. Minato has completely lost it. Good to see some of his forces are starting to see it and question it. That's going to make his downfall all the more sweeter. Tenten, she sounds like she's been brainwashed. Given how much he's gone through compared to Sasuke, it's obvious that Naruto is going to win the fight. Even so, I know you'll still make it feel epic. |
Jostanos chapter 43 . 5/2 omake: "Sasuke, let's leave now while we still can!" "No way! I'm fighting the dobe, and I'm going to defeat. no.. I.. AM.. GOING.. TO. _KILL_ NARUTO UZUMAKI!" "Fine! Then I'll stay too and do the same to Kushina!" Sakura sighs as she walked away from the two Uchihas that she thought that she knew and loved "Idiots.. They're both idiots. At least _I_ know when to surrender to the obvious and at least attempt to be on Naruto's good side." |
Guest chapter 43 . 5/2 I hope Minato burns himself out with that water! |
Power of Magic chapter 43 . 5/2 Glad to see you've updated again after so long, and I look forward to the next chapter. Looks like some of the Konoha ninja are starting to question their loyalties to Minato, who is really going power hungry |
Crimson Hawk Wolf chapter 43 . 5/2 I’m a bit sad about how things turned out with tenten but some how it makes sense. Here I was hoping that Naruto had someone to call an actual friend in the younger days. I wonder how things will go with that fight between Naruto and Sasuke. I’m hoping that will be started and finished in the next chapter but some how I get the feeling that it’s not going to happen like that. I do look forward to reading that. It’s really sad what happened with Taki and I wonder why it had to be so bad like it was. I wonder what’s going to happen from there after what happened this chapter. It’s always good to see some bonding moments between Naruto and Hinata like that. It’s nice seeing them acting like couples relaxing and talking from time to time. I forgot about what happened to poor Hanabi in this story. I always liked her so I hope things are able to turn out well for her and that she’s able to have a better life now. I do hope that Hanabi and Konohamaru end up together at some point since I’ve always liked that pairing idea. I’m looking forward to reading the next chapter and seeing what you have in mind here. I’m curious as to what other unexpected things might happen now. |
thor94 chapter 43 . 5/2 damn minato becoming more and more crazy. Hope you plan kuramamaru and kushina put a big wrench in his bloody massacres soon. It was a while since the last time uzumaki side obtain some significant victory. Also can't wait the battle, hope you plan naruto crush sasuke permanently this time. |
Thebestoftherest chapter 43 . 5/2 Please, let them be turn into foxes. You mentioned it too much for someone not to be turn against their will. Plus yhem becoming something that force them to fight sneakily, and without pride would be enough. |
Paul Lenzen chapter 43 . 5/2 Nicely done.. I'm excited for the next chapter |