Fantastic writing and absolutely awesome story! Loved it completely!

A cleansing ritual. That was well thought out, and well represented. And effective.

Not bad, not bad. Keep the stories coming! :)
The very last "Mm.." sentence, I would have deleted it. I don't know why.

Fantastic. The perfect mixture of sexy and just the teeniest dab of plot that closed up the story so well. (And also made me smile.)

Oh, heck yeah. This is fantastic writing and I'm both envious and completely grateful that everyone gets to read it without having to pay a toll.

WOW! loved it

*clears throat* that was...very sexy! Haha nice little pwp! Can't wait for more of your work!

Btw when are you going to update your other fic "all they seem"? I believe is the name forgive me if I'm wrong. I was just wondering.

Good gawd..!. Very hot..with a bit of sweet thrown in. Oh to have goody two shoes Snow walk in haha. Great stuff

whew! *wiping sweat from forehead*

Holly S*** do you have any idea how hot and sexy that was so incredeble oh man more please it ROCKS!

Holy crap that was hot! And what an ordeal. If only someone would try ME like that