| Reviews for Second Chances: The Life of Raditz |
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Zealot07 chapter 76 . 5/14 Wow, you went far on mating rituals. |
Zealot07 chapter 40 . 5/13 Still sad you stole goku's thunder instead of making a more creative development. |
Zealot07 chapter 37 . 5/13 Got to say I expected raditz to die and fuel Goku or that gohan's death fueled goku and raditz. sort of annoyed only raditz got mad at gohan's death. so yeah, you are an asshole. |
Primordial Vortex chapter 10 . 1/12 So let me get this straight... You allowed goku to use a kamehameha with kaioken x10... meaning an 80k PL WITHOUT even considering what it would boost to with the kamehameha... and 18k vegeta survived? |
Big John chapter 4 . 10/28/2019 You got the time limit Rong it was a year not two |
Young SSJ Isaac chapter 95 . 8/3/2019 Amazing |
twisterblake2015 chapter 106 . 5/28/2019 Amazing end to this story of raditz and i will read the sequel of this story now. |
twisterblake2015 chapter 1 . 5/26/2019 interesting |
Fgougeon chapter 106 . 2/4/2019 Great story |
Fgougeon chapter 45 . 1/31/2019 I kinda wish he would wear the masako x outfit with the gi pants and boots but with his armor and gloves. |
JManM chapter 67 . 1/28/2019 For some reason I doubt Bulma would be laughing after her boyfriend mutilated and almost murdered her friend. |
Guest chapter 12 . 1/18/2019 Okay, in general this story is awesome, but all these references to Radditz hair? Is he compensating for something? XD |
The Legendary Dragon Reaper chapter 1 . 1/17/2019 I see the pairing and at first only to words can come to mind: Poor Krillin. |
Bobywhy chapter 80 . 12/18/2018 2nd time reading this and I'm going to be honest and say that the Mirai Timeline feels a little messy. Going by what I remember of your sequel story Bulma never got marked by Vegeta so that she's marked in this one doesn't make sense to me unless FTrunks somehow butterflied the "almost" bond. Also why is Mirai Bulma so hung up on Vegeta she only knew him as a non villian for 5yrs tops? Both timelines relationship with Vegeta sounded like it started as a few flings that ended up with her getting accidentally knocked up and going from there (the wiki page confirms this). Honestly while DBZ does eventually confirm that they are married I don't ever remembering it happening (from what I understand Vegeta lived with the Briefs well before ever making a move on Bulma so the fact that they were living together doesn't mean much. Perhaps it was the authors hamfisted way of making Bulma and Vegeta a thing since other wise it never would of happened given all their previous interactions and his background) which probably means that marriage happened post cell (wiki confirms that Bulma and Vegeta married post cell). Taking this into consideration with the fact that pre cell Vegeta and Bulma's relationship consisted of him barely tolerating her, frequent insults towards each other, thinking his half Saiyan child was a disgrace and out right ignoring any of his duties as a father, living as a freeloader in her home, and demanding/requesting her to build or fix things for him then I honestly have a very hard time believing she hasn't moved on from him at least emotionally especially considering the competition (Raditz). Maybe she did love (or at least believe she did ((there are several RL couples who only ever stick together because of a kid/kids even if they dislike their partner so it's possible that this is what happened with Bulma and Vegeta except that thanks to FTrunks butterflies only the past Bulma and Vegeta had a chance to actually grow their relationship past this))) Vegeta, but I doubt that it was the kind of love that she wouldn't have gotten over eventually or that her new found relationship with Raditz wouldn't lead to feelings that quickly eclipse anything she ever felt or thought she felt towards Mirai Vegeta. I mean according to your story Vegeta has been dead for about 20 yrs (the big fight that killed Vegeta and most of the Z fighters except for Gohan and Raditz happened when Trunks was about a year old, he was 14 when Gohan died, and he was 17 when he first went into the past to change things) and she only finally starts to move on by giving Raditz a shot for the last 3yrs and they still aren't official? She let him get her pregnant for goodness sake, yes there is a chance that Bulma believed she was to old to get pregnant or didn't take precautions but I find it highly unlikely that as brilliant as she is she didn't realize she was still fertile and think it is more likely she didn't mind or actively sought to get pregnant by Raditz. Given this how does she still think her relationship with Raditz isn't official for some reason and considering that Raditz never got the talk (before meeting his dad in hell) how is it he hasn't accidentally/unknowingly marked her for himself (considering the marking process is a biological compulsion when finding a mate they desire more than any other and not a mark that represents finding your soulmate). All in all I think the Mirai ATimeline would have made more sense if you have Bulma briefly grieve for Vegeta (3 yrs tops) while throwing herself into save the world mode and single mom mode and there fore disallow herself time to even consider dating until after the Android situation is taken care of while slowly finding herself more and more attracted towards Raditz as she watches him become Gohan and Trunks' father figure while stepping into the role of Earth's top defender and one of her closest confidants. If you absolutely must have them wait the better part of 2 decades then simply use Raditz justification of not wanting her to end up more hurt if he dies and therefore hides his attraction from her whereas she doesn't want to possibly ruin one of her last friendships and fears that she'll end up hurt if the Androids kill him too as such they vow to themselves without letting the other know that they'll not make a move until after the Androids are dealt with and begin hiding their mutual attraction from each other (perhaps so well that both are convinced that the other doesn't feel anything for them at all) and only those outside looking in see what's going on (Ie Chi-Chi, Gohan, and Trunks.) |
DragonLichQueen chapter 1 . 12/11/2018 This is literally one of my most favorite stories written for the Dragon Ball fandom. This is literally my 10th time reading this story and I just love it so much. The idea of Raditz becoming good has been something I've literally been obsessing about for years. |