Liking it!.. would love to read more..

Wow, I really love this story I wish it was completed :(

I look forward to seeing what will happen next.

Just finished. I do hope you continue and although it is labeled "horror"... I also secretly hope you don't horriby kill of the dog/fox and ludo, I love them. I mean I like Hoggle as well but... the others remind me of animals and that makes me more sad than a human like creature.

LMFAO I just saw your tumblr name and I want to steal it like Jareth does to Toby. Okay so funny story . I went to school for library science and so believe me I was surrounded by mean librarians (not incl myself which is why I changed careers later, but I digress) So me being the Librarian I am, I loved the smell of books and old libraries from as far back as I can remember, they were my reading spots, my secret makeout spots when I discovered boys, my world basically. Now to my family I was always the odd bookworm. Well after university my mother was stopping to return my little sisters book at the local library and she came to me after and goes, "that librarian is extremely weird. I gave her this book to checkout and she opened it and SNIFFED IT!" She was HORRIFIED and I was laughing but the whole time I'm thinking 'well yeah cuz books smell great!' LOL So when I saw your name OMG it brought back the librarian in me and the memory of my mother's horror at the book sniffing librarian.

I hope you continue this

This is quite interesting and I'm very eager to see where it goes

The chapter was good I wonder if you r still continuing the story

Nice

Good job
We all like a bit of dark jareth...thanks for a great read and please do continue, you'd kick yourself later on incomplete work, not too mention a huge awww from your fan base.

Yay! welcome back!

I'm so happy that u updated. Plz update soon don't make me wait so long for more

So glad you are updating! Thank you!

I hope you update soon! )

Wow...intense