...So you provided a surprisingly logical (hey, this is the KHR fandom, logic is practically a foreign concept here :P) explanation as to why the Fiancate's guardians held Mukuro's power, and I'm just over here like QmQ because that was very awesome of you. I have to say I'm a bit disappointed with the ending, but that's the angry fangirl within me speaking. ...Aforementioned inner angry fangirl is also stabbing a voodoo doll of what it imagines Meridianale looks like, but please ignore that. All in all, despite some grammatical errors (your English is pretty good, considering you're not a native speaker!) and the...heavy use of Japanese in Italy...this story was rather enjoyable! :)

The only thing I didn't like about this story was how you made it sound like it was a pure XS fic with a woman coming between Xanxus and Squalo and making them realize how deeply they cared about each other. It took you 25 chapters of mystery, suspense, some action, and some (pointless, in my opinion) comedy to do that. If you enjoyed writing this story, then it's absolutely worth it, and you don't have to worry about anything I say. As the writer, YOUR happiness is what's most important. But as the reader, it's frustrating when this happens. I read it all the way through to the end just to give you the benefit of the doubt, but I was very disappointed, because as an XS fic, I'll be frank, THERE WAS NOT NEARLY ENOUGH XS. If you had said in the story's summary that most of it was mystery and fighting, I would've at least known to steer clear.

And before you say anything, I know this story was formed progressively and that you didn't have a lot of control over what direction the story was going in or how long it would take you to write it. Sometimes, you just don't know what you want to write until later, so that summary was more what you WANTED the story to be, not what it became.

But that being said, please change the story summary and the genre you placed it in (drama/romance). I personally am the kind of person who hates wasting time, so this story made me very sad when I reached the end and realized that I shouldn't have tried to read it in the first place. Again, your story isn't bad, but it's not a real XS fic.

I was disappointing. I mean seriously the Varia's were so fucking OOC! They will never fall into some cheap trap by some crazy bitch. I don't even think 9th boss is that retarded enough to marry his son to this bitch which scream "lies".

great! w I had so much fun reading! thank you for writing!

Well, I just want to point something out: you know that Ciaossu is just Reborn's sort of 'invention', right? It's not really Italian. Don't know if you missed it out or something; Meridionale says it once in the middle.

OMG BEST STORY. I'VE READ OF KHR
I really like this. Props to you!

You should add a chapter with a sex scene between Xanxus and Squalo, just saying

You should write a sequel

So does this means Squalo like Xanxus too? It's kind of sad though, to see the story I've been waiting so long for end without you knowing it. And then again, there isn't much XS in it... I hope you make a sequel or something all XS in it.
Till next time then...

You should write an alternate ending! Like what would happen if the wife who's name I'm too lazy to go look for above refused to give up and killed Squalo or something :o Sorry..I'm really morbid..but I just kinda wanna see what would happen if there were a sad/bad ending too

I loved reading this story over all. The ending was good so that always is a plus. Nice job :3

We will miss reading it too.
It was an amazing story
Hope u write more interesting stories

Lol u sure expect alot coming from your OC
I'm sure that Squalo can probably handle her one on one
Nice story by the way

It's AU

The battle sure is long... When will the battle end? I want XS... You know, when I read the chapter title 'Our battle is not over', I thought it actually said 'Our battle is over'. But then I re-read it again... Update soon, yeah?