Oh Daryl!
Very good!
Crystal

HOLY SHIT, Kai!
FEELS!

I can't, why would you even...

I'm not nearly as eloquent as you are when it comes to reviews. I think you know this by now.
So I will continue to FREAK THE FUCK OUT instead.

Here I go:

WHAT THE ACTUAL, KAI? That last line, that last quote, oh my actual GOD, are you trying to KILL me?

Everything about this was sweet and sad and wonderful and I want to cry.

I love you.

please write more

this is beautifully written,,loved it x

AAAAHHHHHHHHHH! Absolute perfection! When I seen the title of this story I immediately started singing the song, which is one of my favorite Cake songs, and I just knew it would be a wonderful story. I like how you actually incorporated the song in the one line at the end. But for people not familiar with Cake (and frighteningly there's a lot) it was a good idea to put some of the lyrics up so they would understand the relevance. Simply beautiful! Thank you! -Ali R.

Wow, love it.

SO. MUCH. ANGST. I love it. :)

I liked it will there be more?

I think this was the most poignant and fascinating piece I've read in a long time. I'm awed by it.

This is the most in character piece that I have read. It truly captures the dynamic and what I would assume is the running inner dialogue between these two characters. Truly beautiful writing!

I think that you should keep going with this one it was really good :)