I actually hoped he would foolishly ask her to marry him and she would refuse him adamantly proving once and for all she isn't a fortune hunter poison that comes from women like cathren dousnt leave the mind easily

Giving up. No romance, no spark. The most interesting person is miss Bingley. At least she - unlike everyone else - has some passion. A fanfiction should add an extra layer to the original story, this story do the opposite and is a waste of my time.

Fantastic read!

Darcy and his big mouth!

Caroline is so uuuh

Georgiana is with child?

It was lovely. And believable.
Though the language was a bit too modern sometimes; e.g., true to the book would have been to never call Bingley just Charles when mentioning the list of people attending. ("Darcy, Bingly and Jane", not "Darcy, Charles and Jane".
But this is but a small thing.
Thank you.

I love this story. I started way back in 2013-2014 and am just now rereading it. Incredible job!

This was a very sweet story! I loved your Mr. Bingley even though he was a very minor character.

I loved this story just as much today, my third read, as when I first read it. Thank you. I hope to read much more lively stories from you. Happy writing.

Loved the story! Thank you!

I loved this story so much. Thank you for writing it

This has been a really nice story. I enjoyed how you adapted the plot to ED meeting after the Bingley’s wedding and still find a plausible way to have the equivalent to the Hunsford proposal and a way to reunite them...
Thank you very much!

I'm surprised lizzy can bear to be in Darcy's company. He's being quite a pest, after promising to keep his distance.

Love it
Thank you