Damn xD

TO PERFECT FOR WORDS! PLEASE MAKE A CONTINUATION!

with all due respect i think your latin is better than your english

I'm going on a -review Marina's fics- spree and this is my first victim XD
I really like the symbolics you used, the moon I mean. So beautiful and in the line of sight, but so out of reach. And the fact that you used this to describe Dante and Lady was so fabulous!

The way you wrote Dante in this is truly wonderful. He's not the usual 'I'll seduce you with my boldness' but more like the awkward 'Oh dear God, what if I did it wrong?'. Because I believe that Dante is rather insecure about these kinds of things despite his overly confident cover. Lady was awesome as well, she's not going to stand there and just take it. She'll make you work to woo her.

I truly liked this, it was light-hearted and very attractive and awesomely written, just what a decent DxL fan look for!

Ah, sorry for the late review!
Hmmm, this is a good one, fitting dante's style as well as lady's.
Nice one.

I loved this! I hope you have more Dante and Lady scenarios up your sleeve. Maybe a little more lime or lemon? Lol. This story was not corny. It was awesome! Keep this up. I would write a Dante and Lady fic but my writing skills are not up to par. I would rather read and review! I look forward to more of your updates.

haha, no the ending wasn't that cheesy. lol And, no, this did not suck by any means. I especially like that this wasn't a lemon, Lady looks like the type of woman that'll make a man work for it instead of giving it up just after the first kiss. Oh, and you're most definitely right about the lack of DxL fanfics, I was just complaining about that the other day and then this baby came along.
So thank you. A lot. 8D
RiMI