| Reviews for The New Prophet: Book One: Water |
|---|
   Eragon135790 chapter 14 . 4/8 man i hate it when mc belives in fortunetelling and such an ddoesnt point the obvious flaws out. |
| Mermaid's Magic chapter 14 . 3/12/2016 I really wanted to read the episode 10. You know when they meet the freedom fighters /Jet/ for the first time? but I think it was before this episode. :( . Anyway good job. |
| KnightOwl247 chapter 5 . 10/31/2015 Good story but lucy is walking a very thin line of being a good character and Mary Sue. I hate to say it but she is leaning more and more towards Mary Sue. |
| shugokage chapter 20 . 2/15/2015 Great job on this interesting story! |
| SophieNewman chapter 10 . 7/2/2014 It's not sumki horn, it's tsungi horn. :) |
| SophieNewman chapter 9 . 7/2/2014 "This isn't what it looks like"? Really? That's probably the worst way to tell a person, "Yes, this is exactly what it looks like, and I'm cheating on you. Sorry." Way to go, Lucy. :P |
| Ducky Devilry chapter 5 . 12/20/2013 chaya escaping is like totally her calling lol i love this story and i can feel that itll get better and better each & every chapter |
| JD chapter 20 . 10/13/2013 Is she going to bend something other that water? Please make her a multi-bender. |
| Green Woman chapter 20 . 9/24/2013 OMG I can't wait ! |
| PandaNovella chapter 20 . 9/14/2013 Where is book two! I need book two! |
| C chapter 20 . 9/3/2013 Aww! Loved the end! |
| DarkAngel620 chapter 20 . 8/21/2013 This was pretty awesome. I really loved how although you're essentially just going through the whole story with a new character in the mix it doesn't feel forced. I don't know, you know. But it flows and her presence isn't annoying or over the top or mary sueish in the least. I don't really know. Lol. I'm fantastic at explaining things aren't I? Anyways. The point is I like it and can't wait fir you to start on Book 2. Good luck. :) |
| RenegadeVampireGirl chapter 20 . 8/18/2013 I found this AMAZING! I got so into it it wasn't even funny. I couldn't wait to read the next chapter! :D please upload the next book soon! |
| claudine1e chapter 1 . 8/18/2013 Yeah, its me again... I think i should explain the review of chapter 20 right? Ummm... Ok... I confused the dates (yep... I'm soooo intelligent(you notice the sarcasm right?)) i dont want you getting mad at me... So, i think that the story makes sense and its very catchy... (I read the 20 chapters in one night... That should explain the hour) i cant wait for Toph to appear... Me |
| claudine1e chapter 20 . 8/17/2013 Ok... You haven't updated for almost a year... I know writing isn't as easy as it might see but... I wish you continue this... I love the story and how it develops and I hope you won't abandon it... You would be wasting a great story... Claudine1e PD: Sorry if I don't have the best grammar... I'm not a native speaker |
