| Reviews for With Straws |
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  AnnabethLuna chapter 1 . 8/28/2014 If Jason were never there . . . I love this. There isn't enough Leo/Piper friendship in the books, so thank you for supplying some! |
 KJtheELMtree chapter 1 . 2/2/2013 Okay, this is INCREDIBLY FREAKING AWESOME. the hot chocolate... -Beth M |
| fantasyfestus chapter 1 . 12/27/2012 I love this version of them finding out they were demigods, and I love seeing them at Wilderness School. They are so in character, and the writing is beautiful. I hope you decide to continue it! |
| P.E.E.V.S.Y chapter 1 . 11/16/2012 This was really good! It was really easy to read and Piper and Leo were adorable together! It was really interesting getting a look at their friendship at Wilderness school and I liked how you portrayed it and them :). One thing I noticed was that you seemed to have a couple of tense issues in the beginning. It was only really jarring because everything else was so good, but you might want to take a second look and make sure everything is written in past tense. In any case, I know this says complete on it, but I really hope you decide to continue! This is very interesting and I'd love to find out how Piper and Leo fair at Camp Half-Blood without Jason around. |
| whale-boned chapter 1 . 11/10/2012 daaaaaaang it. you made these two looked so in-character! this is awesome, i'm so glad you didn't delete it in the first place. :D |
| The Stoll Brothers chapter 1 . 11/3/2012 I love your brotherly&sisterly Leo and Piper fics! They're so cute and funny |
| Random Review chapter 1 . 10/28/2012 This was amazing! It really explained a lot about Leo and Piper's friendship that they never really described in the book. I laughed so hard at this: "They're going to sacrifice meat to him Pipes! It must be nice to be a lion." and the whole Panthera leo bit. Leo is epic! 3 |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/24/2012 Awesome! I love ur Leo n Piper stories :) |
| DeziRayDaughterOfApollo chapter 1 . 10/22/2012 Nice story! |
| SomewhereBeyondReality chapter 1 . 10/21/2012 Oh my goodness that was PERFECT. I adore pre-TLH, Leo & Piper fics and this was one of the best. There was a perfect balance of snark and heartwarming moments. I especially love them talking over Isabel, and Leo's: 'I'm so much cooler than all of them combined' comment. You really sold the idea of them being loners together and their gradually building friendship. Despite trying to purge Olympus from your system, I do hope you write more! |
