Reviews for Ritually Yours
Violet Chloe Snow chapter 4 . 4/5
The school didn't inform her parents immediately?
Guest chapter 5 . 3/29
Why do I think that "Jaime Suerte" is James Bond?
Guest chapter 4 . 3/27
Wow! There's a lot of pregnancy in this story: hermione, victoria, and penelope. Obsessed much? Just teasing! This story is so different. It's really nice to read something so original.
Guest chapter 3 . 3/27
I wish you had included a conversation between McGonagall and hermione explaining what had happened and all about concubinage so that we could see her reaction. I find her quiet acceptance of being pregnant at 12 totally perplexing as most girls - if they even think about it - are pretty terrified at the thought. i'd like to know her innermost thoughts about it - even if it's to realise that she doesn't really have a clue what she's got herself into, though i doubt that as she's so bright and well informed about most things.
slstanekt chapter 9 . 3/24
Why is harry the only one with common sense, they should have had hermione stay back from the beginning since she is heavily pregnant and went to get help on top of hedwig
kimjo2 chapter 12 . 3/13
Interesting story. Thanks so much
aamlkb chapter 1 . 3/12
Can it only be closed on Halloween?
edhuff chapter 3 . 1/27
PROOFREAD! Missing words, continuity errors and "laid her HAD on his shoulder
starlite22 chapter 12 . 1/2
I’d like to know about Draco sister did his father have an affair?
starlite22 chapter 11 . 1/2
The characters are well rounded out in this story. I would like to know more about Dracos half sister, did his father have an affair?
SixFtWookie chapter 10 . 10/22/2019
The image of little firstie Harry full on bitch slapping Quirrelmort gave me a bad case of the giggles. Beautiful.
Trahald of Uru chapter 10 . 9/20/2019
Epic poetry on the Hedwig flight.
torlan2003 chapter 12 . 9/19/2019
Great story, I enjoyed it immensely. Joe to read a positive story. Thank you for writing.
Jake Crepeau chapter 12 . 9/17/2019
What a treasury of music you've introduced us to in this story! I found some YouTube performances of "Scots wha hae wi Wallace Bled" and "Calon Ian yn Llawn Daioni" that were really beautiful, too. "Calon Ian" was a good one to end the story with. ;D
Jake Crepeau chapter 3 . 9/17/2019
I used to work in a hospital. We routinely had mothers as young as 9 or 10. So, yes, it happens. Quite frequently, in fact.
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