| Reviews for Magical Origins |
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Guest chapter 86 . 7/21 Great work as always, can’t wait for next one, but can you please focus on updating this one to finish it before you move onto your other stories. I find this story most enjoyable. The Dark Heir has not been updated in a long time either, so can you please update the Dark Heir. By the way, when is the next lemon/sex scene in this story, it has been about ten chapters since the last one. |
Guest chapter 86 . 7/20 Moving onto year six I see, and great work again and it goes to the rest of you work and other stories. But I have one request if you wouldn’t mind, can you please update The Dark Heir. |
dogdog99099 chapter 86 . 7/18 Love it I can’t wait for the next chapter and the ones after that. Ps: could you do a long sex scene in one of the upcoming chapters with Lilly and Harry. |
Ykomat chapter 86 . 7/15 I’ve been reading this since chapter 20 and I love it thank you |
Blazeemperor chapter 86 . 7/13 updated soon please |
FashionLeMode chapter 86 . 7/8 Cool update :) |
Big Dolla chapter 86 . 7/7 legit please kill Ron and Percy off soon they are ruining the story |
bennibob chapter 86 . 7/6 great story, theres a few inaccuracies here and there (lily having a gringotta vault, though I suspect theres stuff with her we haven't learnt yet, saying Cedric died at the tri wizard in the paper) small things here and there but they are few and far between and dont take away from the overall story. I felt having harry kill umbrige and co was a little out of character for him. theres been no showing of him being murdery before, even though it was explained after it just seemed to come out of nowhere. personally I think having him cut her arm off and fingers would of been enough, then having him kill a few death eaters in the ministry would be more than justified and let him keep abit of his edge that you seem to want him to have. anyway it doesn't take away from the story, still been a great read and I'll deffinarly be keeping my eye on it to read the ending when you've released a few more chapters. keep up the good work |
stealacandy chapter 86 . 7/6 Lots of mistakes in this chapter. For example: "To the Dark Lord," said Sirius before he drinks his tea. "His mistake in you could be misplaced," said Bellatrix. When _I_ returned, I apologize to the Dark Lord... "The Dark Lord is anger," said Snape. Also, in cannon HP I think only hundreds died in the giant attack on the bridge. |
WhiteElfElder chapter 86 . 7/6 There are so many questions, more specifically about how Harry's group just got around the Statute of Secrecy by telling those in the mundane government that did not know? Also, is Snape really still playing both sides, or is he really Voldemort's man through-and-through? |
beatshield chapter 86 . 7/4 great chapter |
DarkRavie chapter 86 . 7/4 I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter. |
shugokage chapter 86 . 7/4 Nice job on this chapter! |
mwinter1 chapter 86 . 7/4 Awaiting more. |
relyt118 chapter 3 . 7/4 Dropping story. Girls punching boys isn't funny, it's assault and abuse, just like boys punching girls. |