OMG, this was a slice of hilarity. I would never have imagined Ed Tucker Lane would have...no, I would. This was adorable.
My dad, buzz cut and all, believed all you needed to camp was a decent knife, a machete, a few hot dogs and a couple of army blankets and rope. That left mom to organize the rest. As I've been there, I loved it. Great job. And the two guys across the way and Ed? Lol

Looks like it's Nother trip to the dentist for me! Soooo fluffy and light! I loved it! I love the 4 of them as a group of friends. It just feels right. You write fluff just as well as you write angst. Great job AIP :D

Sassy

Ok that got me laughing. The banter between those four is brilliant I love how they all gel together, the lads are so funny trying to get one up on their Dads. :) Ed in a wet Tee...I'll say no more lol!
Tut tut Ed for forgetting to pack a few things... loved how Greg made him go and asked the the two neighbouring campers who have been watching him for plates. And the two blokes coming on to Eddie...Funny!

Really enjoyed it, thanks for writing.

Hahahaha at Dean's lame joke and Greg's response :) AHHH! There's me again! :D Now off to look up what Kenora actually is... :D Man, if I got an actual picture of Clark and Dean, my heart would probably just give out! Hahaha :D Oh wow, guys just can't help this kinda banter, can they? Haha :) Glad they caught another fish! :) Go the parents! Ohhh no that sucks for Ed! Doesn't he know not to take dangerous risks like that? Haha caught me off guard with Clark's shaving-the-head part! Hahahahahahaha Oh wow nice save there Dean! 'While you do you know... Homework' Of courssseee ;D Hahaha why can I picture all 4 of them sitting around a fire steaks on a stick! :D Hahahahaha the fact that Ed just smeared his corn on the cob with icing literally just made me laugh out loud! 'You wanna go sleep in the Canoe Dean?' Love that line! Wow, thanks, now I reallllllly want some marshmallows! The two guys nextdoor really do make for some good jokes! Really liked how the last word was 'Goodnight' -really fitting. And I'm super glad it ended and everyone had a great time! (Especially after the episode I just finished watching! *hint hint*) Great Job as always, and I really enjoyed this story! :)

I can see why you titled this one 'Fishing Follies'. Yup, the silly things that happened brought a smile to my face. Strange as it sounds, I was most amused by Ed's inability to pack enough dinnerware and cutlery. After that, it was the cupcake icing for butter mishap.

Thanks for sharing this one with us, Andorian. (Beats watching any version of any 'Top Model' reality series any day!)

What a fun, relaxing, enjoyable atmosphere! I really liked all the 'smarta$$' comments and quips between fathers and sons. Imagining them playing 'chicken' in the water conjured some comical images, too. I see you've written a second chapter, so I'm off to read that now. :-)

Nice Chapter... :) clark's right, Camping in rain sucks. Love the father and son stories, so I hope we get to read more stories like that in the future :D

Love Greg, LOL! These four are a good group.

Loved it! It must have been fun to write! :)

Poor Ed! The male campers seemed a little enamoured with him!

It was fun to see them bonding! Even the boys who generally don't spend much time with their parents when they become teenagers!

Looking forward to more fun!

My, my, my! Sounds just like a bunch of men camping. Sex and food. Love the way you brought the "neighbors" into the story and really let Greg give Ed a hard time about it. Him going gay would be like me being 5'8" tall and 120 lbs. Never going to happen!

I like reading these...so true, things always go wrong, but in a fun way! Good job!

I'm laughing :D The banter between all four guys is awesome and very natural. I love how they all gel together, the sons almost as if they've been friends together as long as the dads. Visions of Eddie in a wet tee had me wishing it was Greg but hey, each to their own haha. A great bonding day for all 4 guys and I hope they do it again in the future :) Andorian and Alice agreat writing team as always :)

Great update! ;) Love how you include clark in your stories! Sorry I was late on reviewing ;(

Great chapter. I loved all of the father/son interaction.

This was really a great funny story. I love the interaction between Greg, Eddie and their sons. It's good to see them away from work and relaxing.

Go going with Eddie catching the first and biggest fish and Clark having to clean it. Loved the sex talk while they were fishing.

So Eddie forgot to pack a few things. I liked how Greg made Eddie go and asked the guys who have been watching him for plates. Can't believe you allowed two men to come on to Eddie...LOL! They obviously didn't know who they were "Smiling a lot at" !

Of course Eddie would take his gun with him...no surprise there. It was really cute how Eddie and Greg brought the sex talk back up to embarrass the boys. Although they got even when they informed their dads that they could hear them and so could Eddie's friends.

Very cute story I hope we can see more of them together relaxing...