The best story I have read in a long time truly touched me and I’m glad that you actually wrote it keep on writing this is very beautiful

Rory you know some times there’s gold digger where they think if they say that there pregnant with Logan baby that they can get rich or break up your marriage and take your place but not talking to him and maybe you get that woman to do a lie detector test then you know if she slep with Logan

Rory’s a fucking cunt she probably cheated on Logan with Tristan but when someone lies and said that Logan was with someone else when she gave birth to her son I call a lie when thing get ruff she runs in stead of getting his side of the story

So Logan can’t help raise his kids
And Tristan is not her fucking friend can someone just kill him off or will Rory cheat on Logan with him is that where your heading with this story

So Rory gonna cheat on Logan with Tristan why else would she give her number to someone that wants more then friendship

LOGAN SHOULD NOT HAVE TO ASK RORY TO MARRY HIM RORY IF SHE WANTED TO MARRY HIM SHE CAN FUCKING DO IT THEN MAYBE LOGAN Can go hmm let me think this over and I’ll get back to you tomorrow then tell her I’m sorry but being married to limits my wide open future maybe we can do long distance relationship then maybe that bitch would know how it feel how Logan felt when she ripped out his heart and and if you say well Logan should have waited then I’m gonna say no he should not have to wait for Rory Finally get on the same page and no she did not love him enough

Sorry I would not believe Rory if she wanted anything but being fuck buddy and I think even if she said not now but if moved with him instead of the fucked up offer of long distance relationship with no deadline then maybe she would have still had him and if you say or but Logan had London so why can’t they do the long distance relationship well my answer to that is Logan did not want London he was sent there and it was not like bitch Rory wanted with no deadline where it was not committed for until she 60 when her career dry’s out

Yes she was young but she was not a fucking child and i don’t blame Logan for think she would break his heart for if I was him I would stay the fuck away from the bitch that did not want anything more then long distance relationship with no deadline so she can have wide open future and never settle down if I was Logan don’t fucking trust Rory and who is the father of the little girl if it’s logan why the fuck did she not tell him even if they were not together he can choose to be in the child’s life

Rory how would you feel if the person dated for 3years not only told you that they would not Mary you cuz you hold them back for there wide open career then offer you long distance relationship with no deadline would you stay in a relationship with someone that did not see you as anything but a fuck buddy
No should have to wait for a bitch to decide she wants more then her fucking career and no I don’t think she gave a fuck about him
What I think they both should have done is before they got too serious talk about were they see this relationship going so they would not waist 3 fucking year with someone that would never want what you wanted and another thing I don’t think bitch Rory would have settle down with him cuz her career would always come first not saying career is not important but it should not be the most important that you sacrifice your’s and the person you love happiness and I don’t care if you a girl or a boy NO ONE SHOULD HAVE To WAIT 10,20 OR 30 YEARS if you think someone should be happy that they can be your fuck buddy cuz you can not comment to the person then you fucking fucked up no one should have to settle for a long distance relationship with no deadline

I hate that you made me cry so many times. There was more happy tears then sad ones. My only critique is , I wish you would've told us what everyone else was doing in their lives in the epilogue. All in all you are a fantastic writer and I have enjoyed every single one of your stories that I read. I look forward to reading the rest of them.

please consider to keep writing and maybe do a sequal. this is beyond amazing. your writing is literally breath taking. would love to see more from you

This story was AMAZING. Perfect in every way. Thank you for writing it.

Amazing! I absolutely loved this story. It showed that love conquers all and that a loving family is the most precious thing in this world. I loved the way you always showed how much Rory and Logan loved eachother throughout the years from dating and early flashbacks to the perfect Santorini destination wedding that Logan made all the plans for and then with children. It was great to see that even his parents recognized the importance of family and opened their hearts up to Rory and Ava. I adored the fact that Shira had encouraged Logan to chase Rory because she is the one for him and even Mitchum had admitted he was wrong when he criticized Rory's talents all those years ago. I was worried in the few chapters where you introduced some angst, but was thrilled when it all was resolved and better than before. I really enjoyed your amazing writing and appreciate all your hard work. You made me smile, cry and laugh throughout this story. Thanks so much!

Great story. Very well written

aww how sweet