Great Story!

Hey Nisroc! I don’t know if you’ll see this, but I first came across your fanfictions when I was young … it’s been maybe 6-8 years since I first found them. I’ve commented before, but I was so immature! I’d be embarrassed if you knew which alias I used. :p

Reading through Second Chances again made me think about how I used to (and still do) love your stories a lot! You expand the world of Naruto in a believable and fascinating way. I really like how you explore your characters’ histories and personalities … Thanks a lot for writing these stories. If you ever return to this, I’ll stick with you til the end!

pls continue

Continue please

Oh my god!
I've been following your story for quite some time now and I'm so happy you posted again! Honestly, I really love how you portray not only Obitos but also the childrens character. They are written very well and I think you managed to make every single person in your story very authentic.
And did I just spot good old Madara? I only had to read "dance" in combination with a student ready to fight and I kind of knew it was him. (Well, at least I hope it is.)

PS: I'm convinced your writing style hasn't suffered the slightiest bit. I still enjoy reading as much as I did during the old chapters. You're doing hella fine :D

Hyped for following chapters and wishing you a good day,
Red

WOW you actually got the Mitsuki name right! Even though he is not a girl... even though he is not an Uchiha... Even though he is Orochimaru's son... :')

Ohhhh, my gosh! I bet Reikoku is the child abductor! And I looked up what Reikoku means and apparently it's "cruel" or "coldhearted". And the way he said "That's it, little ones... come to me..." was just CREEPY. And he seems to be good with children so that could be part of it. EEEEK. And to think these kinds of things happen in real life...
Anyways, your writing's just fantastic as usual and I can't wait to read more! At this moment in time, there are still a lot of chapters that technically I could read right now because they've already come out, but I'm saving them for tomorrow because it's really late... and I have school tomorrow... whoops.
But yeah, including fanfictions and published books, you're one of my favorite writers. You have so much creativity in coming up with all this stuff!

Aww, I'm kind of happy now. It's good to see that the rest of the team is starting to open up to him. Great writing, as always! Your fanfictions are always my favorites! On another note, I ate miso soup a few hours ago and I was just kind of sitting there slurping my miso soup and giggling. 'Cause Miso, y'know... My mom was giving me funny looks. Anyways, I finished it and I was sad, so I came and read this story. Once again, your writing is fantastic and it always makes my day. I would read it on my birthday but my family is dragging me off somewhere, so I'll have to read it afterward. But in the meantime, I'm going to read as much as I can! Please keep it up, but at the same time, no pressure!

I don't think your mother shouldn't say things like that... Say that your writing is a waste of time. We don't think it is. We're glad you update your stories. As long as it doesn't affect your health or anything related to school or a job, that is! And as always, you've somehow managed to make this chapter even better than the previous ones, and the last chapter better than the one before that. It just keeps getting better, and better!

I couldn't tear my eyes away from the screen. My laptop was at two percent when I finished, so it didn't die on me before I could plug it in, thank goodness. That was amazing, though. I wish I had a better word to describe it!

Wow, this is so awesome. And deep... Though, at the same time, I don't think I'm ever going to look at a bowl of Miso soup the same way ever again. I guess that's a good thing, though! He's like Naruto, but in his own way. He acts stupid and all but on the inside, he's a kind, caring kid who really wants the best for the people around him. I think he'll make a fantastic Hokage.
On another note, Obito is such an emo. I wish he would open up just a little bit! He just needs a few more little pushes to get there, and then maybe he and his team and everyone will be happy.
Anyway, I love all of your fanfictions and really appreciate how much effort you put into them. Keep it up, please!

The ending in this chapter is powerful

YES! I love this story and I’m so happy you’re back! Honestly this is one of my top ten favorites on this site. I love how this story deviates from the norm. If you need a beta reader I’d be happy to help. Keep up the good work and don’t hesitate to reach out if you need motivation, because you’re clearly a great writer anyway.

It’s good to see that you’re getting back into writing again because I honestly really did miss this story.

Glad to see you are finally back and I look forward to what happens next.