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   7Tigress77 chapter 16 . 12/22/2012 Yes it's hear,thank you so much,I loved the chapter. Merry Christmas to you as we'll. Your friend, 77Tigress77 |
| ShadowBrook17 chapter 16 . 12/21/2012 WHOA! That was GREAT! I mean seriously, ALL your chapters are great, but you get my point. But again, that was just TO awesome! I can't wait to see if you can get us back, SO TOTALLY AWESOME!:D Love it bro! Your #1 fan, friend and big sister... ShadowBrook17 |
| ShadowBrook17 chapter 15 . 11/25/2012 WHOO! AWESOME CHAPTER! AS always, of course. Man, your chapters are ALWAYS worth the wait, little bro. I mean seriously, that was just awesome! I can NOT wait to see the next chapter, just TO awesome!:D Your #1 fan, friend and big sister... ShadowBrook17 |
| 7Tigress77 chapter 3 . 11/22/2012 Wow you really out did your self this job,keep it up. Your friend, 7Tigress77 |
| ShadowBrook17 chapter 14 . 11/15/2012 WHOA! Song, married to HIM?! AHHH! What a turn, was NOT expecting that, TOTALLY AMAZING! But I still feel really bad that you're blind now. I wish you'd let me help you! I hate it that you're like that, and that you blame yourself. But AMAZING chapter, I can NOT wait to see what awesomeness you come up with next. WHOO!:D Your #1 fan, friend and big sis... ShadowBrook17 |
| ShadowBrook17 chapter 13 . 10/28/2012 AWESOME! THAT WAS JUST AWESOME! Oh wait... ALL YOUR CHAPTERS ARE AWESOME! Sorry, I always get excited when I read a new chapter from you. That was great! I can't wait to see more about this old friend of Tehmota's. This is gonna be good. LOVE it, little bro!:D Your #1 fan and friend... ShadowBrook17 |
| ShadowBrook17 chapter 12 . 10/28/2012 Awww, that was AWESOME! You did just wonderful on that, and yeah, you get better with every chapter you write. It's just wonderful to see you get better, as you keep writing. It's just AWESOME! Oh man, that chapter was just so sweet. I'm SO glad that you're back, and I know everyone else is too. AWESOMENESS!:D Can NOT wait to see what happens next, little bro! Your #1 fan and friend... ShadowBrook17 |
| Wolf'sRain013 chapter 11 . 10/27/2012 Cool chapter! A few friendly pointers: .Plot seems slightly rushed, but not too rushed. .There need to be periods in places. .There are some things you need to capitalize. Other than that, you did good with the story so far, and you have earned the Aidyl stamp of approval for good improvement! :D |
| ShadowBrook17 chapter 11 . 10/27/2012 Oh man, I think I'm going to cry! That was amazingly written and I'm just... blown away as always! You have done just amazing with this chapter and I can NOT wait to see what will happen next. I feel so bad for poor Tehmota, Heishi and Kin. That's hard. But I can NOT wait to see what happens next, little bro! Your #1 fan and friend... ShadowBrook17 |
| ShadowBrook17 chapter 10 . 10/26/2012 AWESOMENESS! That was SO totally awesome. I mean really, that was just AMAZING! I mean, I'm blown away as always. You did great on it and I can NOT wait to see the next chapter and can NOT wait to see you go on this quest. TO AWESOME!:D Your #1 fan and friend... ShadowBrook17 |
| ShadowBrook17 chapter 9 . 10/25/2012 Haha, that chapter was AWESOME! Oh man, I'm so glad that Tehmota and the cubs are safe and that you stopped Alexander from making this plan of his. I can NOT wait to see what he will do next, just AWESOME as always and I'm glad that Jonathon and Victoria came back with you. Rocken awesome, as always, my friend! Your #1 fan and friend... ShadowBrook17 |
| ShadowBrook17 chapter 8 . 10/24/2012 WHOA! That was AWESOME! I loved the fight sense between you and the other three, talk about GREAT! And poor Tehmota, Kin and Heishi. I sure hope they will be alright! I'm on the edge of my seat for more, as always my friend! Great job! Your #1 fan and friend... ShadowBrook17 |
| ShadowBrook17 chapter 7 . 10/23/2012 Oh man, that was just AMAZING! Oh man, that was just... WHOA! I LOVED it and I can NOT wait to see what will happen to everyone next. That was just... WOW! I'm totally blown away as always. Just simply amazing, as always, my friend! Your #1 fan and friend... ShadowBrook17 |
| ShadowBrook17 chapter 6 . 10/23/2012 OH MY GOSH! OH WHOA! I'm just in total shock right now. Oh man... that was just... WHOA! I'm just blown away right now, that was just... AMAZING! Oh man, what's going to happen now? What did Alexander DO to you and what about Tehmota, Kin and Heishi? AHHH! Can NOT wait to see what happens next, my friend! Your #1 fan and friend... ShadowBrook17 |
| ShadowBrook17 chapter 5 . 10/22/2012 Oh man, that was AWESOME! And I love that song SO much! I love how you did this chapter. It's just great! I feel bad for Tehmota with her nightmares and all. That's scary! I mean really, but this is GREAT! I'm just LOVING it and I can NOT wait to see what will happen next. Just amazing, my friend! Your #1 fan and friend... ShadowBrook17 |
