Capital! This was excellent chum, I hope you make a sequel soon!

I like the story, and you did a pretty good job at getting everyone in character, but I can't help feeling Tony would've seen Star Wars and recognized Luke from it and just started fangirling... Thank you for writing1

Is it odd that I squealed a lot in this, particularly in that fight scene? That was fun. Good job, I'd like to read more of your work.

This was awesome! Too bad Tony didn't get his hands on a lightsaber. That would have been fun

That was funny! Good job!

This is really good. If you could do more I would appreciate it. Excellent story and writing.