I'm just gonna slowly back away from this train wreck.

Pretty great chapter

sorry man hope you get over your loss

it's not frogs it's toads

you made naruto into a bitch

Unbearable, the paragraphs jumbled one to another, lack of focus and you just dumped everything in one line. And the typo, duh!

Why would Ayame be going?

Naruto doesn't use of the to learn any of the rinnegan abilities and instead of doing research on your story to make sure the facts are right you skip over it with a notation admitting you don't know and basically don't care so you are skipping over the part.

Has Naruto told his kage the truth of who he is?

Kurenai didn't recognize him?

This story seems a bit odd. I don't see the purpose of having the merchant family in this story.

It's funny when sasuke says he is the strongest uchiha alive when he is the weakest considering there are madara ,Tobi/obito , Itachi and sasuke. lmao

Oh my god you really suck at writing. Your grammar, spelling, word choice and sentence structure all need some serious work. I’d suggest getting a beta.

Nice pacing and while there are errors they still don't break the story. Big problem for me is changing your mind mid story and just have them explaining in a random manner why the things are how they are, big example is minato just being ignorant and still caring at the beginning then changing it to him having plans even though he was apologizing for not helping naruto enough, even his thought pattern was like this as you wrote it like that, you changed how to go with the plot mid way and that bothers me as you could do the same throughout the story...

Using the CRA as an excuse to have a harem when he could just threaten to leave if he didn't want to be in the CRA...