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   jubulleflo chapter 4 . 6/13/2019 YESSSSS MAGIC REVEAL MAGIC REVEAK MAGIC REVEAL - I'm a little enthusiastic? Maybe too much? Hopefully it's not weird or anything heh (I barely read anything of this chapter yet, but I just had to say how much I'm happy with the turn it seems to be taking. I really love the idea of Gwaine knowing about Merlin's magic for some reason. It just feels sort of natural, like he'd be the right person to tell, if that makes any sense) |
| jubulleflo chapter 2 . 6/13/2019 The way you tied the two chapters together is absolutely amazing! Honestly it feels natural, it flows naturally in the scene, like Arthur's dialogue in the last scene could have seemed forced but honestly it sounds so great and I'm really enthusiastic about your story holy heck |
| Danielle chapter 1 . 1/10/2019 Wow I love this! |
| Cat chapter 11 . 1/8/2018 YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES |
| Zander L. Jones chapter 22 . 7/19/2017 I absolutely loved this chapter 22! I love how merlin gets the chsnce to show off how powerful he is and Gwaine and Arthur are along for the ride! And cute athusia ! Love it! |
| Superwholockmerlinwestwing chapter 43 . 1/30/2017 Love it! I have three prompts so feel free to pick and choose, but they're all of the same vain. Prompt (if you're still taking these): Arthur and/or the Knights find out about Merlin's living conditions, ie, his small, cold room and uncomfortable bed and do something about it. Prompt: The most relaxing part of Arthur's day is the bath Merlin prepares for him, but when he storms into Gaius' room one day to find Merlin washing with a flannel, having never been able to afford a tub, Arthur treats him to a real relaxing bath. (Could be Merthur or not). Prompt: Merlin and Gaius run into some money trouble and Merlin has to beg for scraps from the kitchens and pray Arthur leaves leftovers. Arthur finds out. |
| Linorien chapter 43 . 12/24/2016 Yes! Everything about this is perfect and wonderful! Merlin and Freya being reunited is a great Christmas gift. |
| mersan123 chapter 43 . 12/24/2016 What a wonderful Christmas present. Love to see a happy and loved Merlin. Thank you so very much! |
| LaRieNGuBleR chapter 43 . 12/24/2016 Perfect gift for the Christmas! Thank you. Happy holiday to you! |
| Mojito737 chapter 42 . 10/14/2016 Oh... it was so sweet! I really like your stories! They are always amazing! Just btw if you're still looking for some inspiration, I think it would be very interesting to see, what will happen, if Merlin loses control over his magic. So if you like this idea and you actually start working on it, I look forward to it. And I also look forward your another story. Can't wait! And one more thing. Steven Moffat! Really!? You are such a lucky person! I envy you so much! (in good way of course ;)) |
| LaRieNGuBleR chapter 42 . 10/3/2016 Good friend is hard to come by. I'm glad Merlin has Gwaine, and everybody of course! |
| mersan123 chapter 42 . 9/30/2016 Thanks Mamzelle, that was a lovely heart warming chapter. As much as I enjoy angst it is wonderful to have the occasional story that leaves me smiling. Thank you again. |
| Linorien chapter 42 . 9/30/2016 This is so adorable! Just what I needed in my study break. |
| LFB72 chapter 42 . 9/30/2016 Very cute. Dragons are cats with wings and without fur - they've put their coats on insideout and are hiding - waiting for magic to return. |
| dmarie1184 chapter 2 . 8/15/2016 Another wonderfully sad but great chapter. :) |
