OKAY, so large issues, one does not impose all of the changes that you are trying to impose that quickly, seriously, lelouch will be facing rebellions in almost every section of the empire, from the rich(nobility) the military, the general populous. The would be massive economic upheaval , loss of jobs. And the list could go on and on. And I'm not even getting into the large more prominent issue that would happen from the rest of the world, because in reality, every single country and alliance would turn on britannia and declare war in minutes of some of the more major changes that lelouch made so fare in the story.

This needs to happen slowly and over time, not all at once... ANY political science course would tell you this.
Hell a 2minute political science video would tell you that

We getting anymore of this?

I seriously DON'T think that Lelouch would bring his friends to the throne room...
I mean, some of them are commoners...
Also it hurts the picture of being emperor...

I loved this, so please continue writing this. I know that this ain't lively to happen, cause you haven't been updating for five years, but still, please update.

Despite this not being updated for a few years, I am hoping they his "slight harem" to constantly only C.C., Kallen, and Shirley as they were the only ones in the anime to be portrayed as love interests.

Where is cheese kun

Awesome story!

I know it has been just over 3 years since this was updated, but this is by far my favorite version of lelouch obtaining the throne. I so wish that one day no matter how long it takes you could put in at least one more chapter it would be one of the best days of my life, because this fan fiction is to good, I could not stop reading it once I started.

Well, I have to say Lelouch only has to thank himself for this one.
His stubborn insistance to let absolutely nobody under the Black Knights know that he is Zero, even now that they trust him under both identities, is practically an invitation for anyone to impersonate him.
I am actually surprised that nobody had tried that in canon.

To be honest, this is your finest work on this site and I'm surprised that it hasn't been continued. Having 96,000 words being jam packed in just 4 chapters and the incorrect usage of the title "your highness" (as Lelouch is no longer a Prince but an Emperor and so should be referred to as "Your Majesty") had greatly annoyed me to a point... Aside from that, I did really enjoy the plot and events of the story and say you should continue to pursue this work. Your writing style is great, but you at times, fail to see realistic situations leading to moments of OOCness in the story. Also the input of the OC 'Lucina' was totally unnecessary and I fail to see the point of her existence, so she does annoy me a bit. Anyway, do hope you continue this (hopefully with a much shorter chapter this time) as I do want to see what Lelouch will do to this phony 'Zero'.

Ch2
"I don't exactly know, but it could potentially over-ride your new law about the Japanese.
Absolute Monarchy. If they did that Lulu could kill them for treason.

Why do the student council know how to speak Japanese, especially Nina?!

I think that might anger Britannia more than DISMANTLING the number-area system did

I would have expected Lelouch to be agnostic if not Christian. English background is connected to Christianity, but with his childhood, Lelouch ending up theothropic is highly possible, but I am also doubtful he would dismiss the possibility for a divine existence out of hand as well thus agnostic.

deep Japanese connection THAT WAS ALSO CONNECTED to Britannia

"She's alright, still clumsy as ever. Why
This would place your series in the earlier parts of R1…so disjointed! Lol

she panicked at the thought of Lelouch discovering her Japanese mother
Why is she panicking since it is obvious he knows, and she has been speaking of her true mother not the Britannian woman people believe is her mother?

I contacted him MERE moments ago about a possible TEMPORARY peace-treaty.

Then again the old Britannia tried that as well
When? The only time I can think of them doing so is the NAC.

D-DI….DID you tell him?

Since before I became Zero, he knew
Nice wordplay.

With Schnizel in his pocket Lulu has free range to do as he wants.

for your BIG brother
Lulu is a year older than Euphie.

Isn’t France across the date boarder compared to Japan? Thus there Wednesday is Japan’s Thursday.

I'm your GIRLFRIEND now?

He could handle speaking to people in person, but he'd never really been on television for the entire world to see before; his acceptance speech was another story though.
I am surprised it would bug him since it is just public speaking which he is very good at.

It was Prince of Japan at the time though.

You finished them…" Suzaku retorted with a smile.
How did Lulu finish a fist fight against superhuman Suzaku?

school together since almost a year ago.
This would place it in R2…so there was no Black Rebellion?

it an HONEST ATTEMPT.

mostly of Britannian REPORTERS

A RUMOR has been

Why would Suzaku become Prime Minister? A Prime Minister is a democratically elected official much like the US President except that the PM has to be elected from a member of their Legislative body unlike the President who can be any US born citizen of age 25 or older.

Will Lelouch set up Britannia itself as a metiocracy (a person his rewarded based on his accomplishments)?

Will Lulu also choose its monarch?

really was JAPAN’S savior

being offered THE POSITION/THRONE OF (THE) Emperor.

single nation conquering the world, that serves no point
that was the answer Lulu gave CC though. “When someone wins, the fighting will end.”

I think Lulu should claim that the weak can become strong. A true statement that ties in with human ingenuity.

shouting their LOYALTY to him at a party
Loyalty is not the right word either but I am drawing a blank on the issue.

If anyone who knows you as the sickly and frail Kallen ASKS, you can just lie

Kallen would now be Dame Stadfelt. Dame is the female equivalent of Sir and in proper use they are given to those who have earned a knighthood.

Knight of THE Round

He could have SWORN he

anything THEY hear or read.

Ch3
"Kallen has been training under special military forces to become a Knight of Round. She hasn't earned that title just yet, but she's earned something better; my Knight."
Technically they are the same thing. The Knights of the Round ARE the Emperor’s Knights of Honor.

special combat situations." She hinted at.
What was she hinting at?

spoke with false APPROVAL
Appraisal is the act of judging something

Cornelia from afar watched closely as Lelouch allowed commoners to handle him so informally
You never explained WHY Cornelia is so dismissive of commoners when the woman she worshipped (literally worshipped as her goddess) WAS a commoner.

YOUR night life is so much

but REFUSED to be an Eleven

You claim you dislike your mother and would rather not deal with HER
I thought that was only before she knew about the refrain use.

but it could NOT be so.

She wasn't used to talking to commoners on such a personal topic
Milly is a noble by blood though.

my mother, AN EMPRESS,

She could NOT have been older than fourteen or fifteen.

POUR me a drink

then Japan AS a whole will flourish

He began as Kaguya snuggled up to him.
"I can't wait to tell Master Zero about this!"
Already starting an affair lol

Wouldn’t she have used the JP suffix –sama when referring to Zero?

Geass don't actually receive a true power
Then what do they receive?

and that the rights to the mine were stolen from him upon his death.
How was it stolen when it was GIVEN to Marianne by his will?

Emperor IS CHILDLESS doesn't always work out so well

The throne of Britannia has remained in control by the very same blood line that forged the country two-thousand years ago.
Considering they did not come into power until Queen Elizabeth, how can he say they had a throne for that long?

us to wear OUR black

guard SEES us

Kallen had been in one before when Zero first lead the mission to rescue Suzaku from execution
That one was a fake though

perfectly BRILLIANT idea
bright is not necessarily wrong but it sounds awkward at the very least.

He just prayed that her Geass didn't activate during the meeting
He should know Murphy’s Law by now. Although if memory serves its Smith’s Law that people are actually quoting when they say Murphy’s Law. I find the summarization of Smith’s Law hilarious though, “Murphy was an optimist” lol

Kallen will receive the Guren MK-II S.E.I.T.I.N. EIGHT ELEMENTS.
How is she getting it? that machine was a ninth generation made from the combined tech of 8th generation Lancelot Conquista and 8th generation Flying Guren (Cannot remember the proper name). Right now both machines are in their 7th generation forms and neither designer has access to the others tech to combine them with Cecila’s energy wings.

Why is the Britannian Sacred Vault in Japan?

w ho was USED to

"Hello, V.V." she smiled softly.
Why would she smile softly at the person who cost her, her wish?

So she was using Enkou?

What was the secret?

Experiment A and B?

"It's in the mainland. Nowhere near here.
Its in the World of C so he can access it from Japan.

What of Schnizel? Is he serving as a Trojan Horse?

He is currently away on renaissance duty in Area Eleven
Did you mean reconnaissance duty? That is a poor excuse considering Japan had long been conquered. The definition is preliminary survey to gain information usually (and nearly always) used in the case of military surveys into ENEMY territory. Area 11 belongs to Britannia after all. Renaissance duty would translate as rebirth duty. Okay with the second paragraph it becomes a possibility with its core definition.

just as familiars
Familiars?

You have a lot of comma usage issues.

gine, your MAJESTY!
Highness would be princes and princesses. Majesty is for kings and emperors (and queens and empresses). In this case, Majesty is a proper noun and thus capitalized so it becomes “your Majesty.” I cannot remember if the “your” becomes a proper noun in this case or not. I am an American and we have no royal family (or proper nobility). I have studied history though which is why I know some.

Wow. People found out where he was fast. Then again, there were lots of teens who found out in a high tech state, so media saturation would be EXTREMELY high.

last Emperor, I'll have

Okay I will eventually come back and make a reply with all comma corrections for this fic…but not today lol

the will was written before we left and he just never changed it." Lelouch tried to lie.
That’s the best he can come up with? Based off the wording, it would be obvious it happened AFTER Area 11 was formed.

Holy Imperial Family of Britannia
Proper nouns. It may be five words, but it is one concept.

Sincerely, Schneizel and Odysseus would have carried
I would find a new word to use in the place of “sincerely.” Could Odysseus rule like his father though? Schneizel and Cornelia are the two who would be most suited for this.

Still trying to figure out where this is chronologically. I know it is R1, but other than that…no clue.

It would have been hilarious if CC dressed as Zero walked into the office and addressed Lulu as her Liege claiming to be his Knight of Honor.

He'd been flying around in Knightmare frames for some time now
Milly reminded him that Suzaku was Euphemia's knight then patted him on the shoulder.
So near the end of R1.

No Kallen on the flight?

the world had ever KNOWN, the view
How does there friend becoming emperor have any context to a view?

A couple hours later they landed on top of the Britannian Palace in Area Eleven's embassy base.
Why would it take a two hours to fly to a place in the same city? They could drive to it in less time, and they would have to deal with traffic in a car.

those school CLOTHES.

While Lelouch's Emperor outfit was being made from scratch
I am impressed if they made that outfit in a few hours (I know very little about making clothes though). Would have preferred something flashier for Kallen. I am unsure if flashier is the word I am looking for though.

tell their parents to watch the television for them. They knew the acceptance speech would be aired live and that everyone in the world would be watching.
Kallen’s step mom is going to have a heart attack.

Everyone that was a part of the royal courts for all of Britannia had been gathered into the room and awaited Lelouch's grand entrance.
It cannot be everyone since it was a surprise speech and many would be in Britannia or Europe and some on important business.

I have a few ideas for his speech. One would be talking about why he and his dad have such different viewpoints (Charles growing up in the Era of Blood or whatever it was called) and losing his faith in humanity. Lulu going through a hell but seeing the good in humans along with their evil.

Would Euphie address Nunnally as Nunna-chan with her sister there (who is extremely xenothropic [hatred of other races])

the same eyes they shared, the eyes they both inherited from the same father.
Lulu got his moms eyes though (Nunna got her dad’s though)

Schneizel glared down at Lelouch who returned the grim look.
That is very ooc for Schneizel who displays signs of having psychoses.

hand FELL from Lelouch's shoulder gently.
This fits better. Not much is shown of his true feelings while being completely polite.

he shouted democratically
How do you shout democratically?

Holy Britannian Empire

The Japanese is their proper name and you will use it as such.
He could say something like, “My Father recognized them as being great enough to become part of Britannia, that greatness shall be recognized!”

Japan will remain a district controlled by Britannia, but not as an area number. Japan will be an allied nation
If it is UNDER Britannia’s control it cannot be an allied nation. The United States has 50 States but none of them are allied nations because they all fall UNDER the Federal government. For things like the Soviet Union and other Empires the same rule applied.

nearly the Second Coming of THE God.
There is only one faith that has the phrase Second Coming and that is Christianity, thus “the God,” not “a god,” or you could say “nearly the Second Coming of the Christ.”

Schnizel’s way would not be doomed considering his mindset. As stated in canon, in a peaceful time Schnizel would be the perfect king.

You're not having sex are you? At a time like this?!" Kallen hissed madly.
Its night…why would she be able to say that when a lot of people have sex at night when they HAVE no work to attend to?

"I know your dirty little secret now, Zero. You're not going anywhere." Schneizel whispered darkly
Lelouch looked straight into Schneizel's eyes and returned the glare. "I, Lelouch Vi Britannia, command you to forget that you ever heard my phone call or any knowledge of me being Zero. You shall ignore all further proof that I or Kallen are tied to the Black Knights. Furthermore you shall support and acknowledge me as your Emperor."
I am EXTREMELY doubtful Schnizel would tip his hand that early and easily. He has no idea if Lulu is armed at the very least and with where they are it would be easy for him to kill Schnizel but if Schnizel killed Lulu then Schnizel could be executed for treason (many people would want him out of the game after all) and Schnizel could not defend himself, since Lulu had the right to kill him whenever he felt like doing so. The last line was a good attachment though, and if your Schnizel is like canon, he likely lacks the will to be able to break it even if it is from an incomplete geass.

That isn't normal, especially since she's in an unfamiliar palace."
Since she could get lost wouldn’t it be normal if that occurred?

Why would there be a payphone in a secure part of the Embassy?

Lelouch, the unconscious god
I just found the statement funny, but shouldn’t it be “Lelouch, the unconscious devil” lol

Surprised Nina was not devastated about EuphieSuzaku.

my little sister is single and has always had a crush on you" they all left back to the palace.
Hahahahaha At least he is a good big brother lol

replied as she pranced into the SCHOOL.

like a super STAR

"You know, when you went around dating every girl who flew themselves at you!
That was mid R2 though so how is Euphie alive?

who THREW themselves at you!

he should go back to the dorms
he doesn’t sleep in the dorms though. He sleeps in the student council building that he is already inside of.

Suzaku purred as he snuggled the grey cat.
That is creepy! Lol. Why is Arthur not biting him?

Shouldn’t Lulu be preparing himself for royal duties now that he has a lot of free time?

She just doesn't understand normal people
Lulu should tell Nelly that she doesn’t understand the woes of commoners like his mother (Marianne who Nelly worshipped).

Only seven of which bore his children."
More than seven.

Interesting fic.

Wow this is awesome! I like the direction of the plot and how this story makes lelouch a hero king. I like seeing his "saint" side. Its like the original series was what happened when he kinda let his "demon" side take over and that this story is for his "saint" side. I really like the contrast. I really hope you right more chapters to this even though its been years since your last update. This story has a lot of potential.

good story so far
PLEASE UPDATE as soon as posible

a very good and detailed chapter. congrats and keep it up