Reviews for The Mole: Saboteur Investigation
Bronzern chapter 42 . 8/13/2013
This chapter made me laughed through the entire time! The alternate players are soo stupid that I believe they all had IQ lower than 40.
Princess Toady chapter 42 . 8/13/2013
This spoof was so freaking funny ! LOL

Bootler was definitely the one that made me laugh the most, but maybe I'm kinda biased. Toad's obsession with Toadiko was pretty funny too and the players just couldn't keep up with the game's basic aspects. xD

They really sucked badly !

It was a very good read, so congratz for finishing this story ! There are so many Mole stories that have no end nowadays.
D.K chapter 40 . 8/8/2013
Wow. I have read almost every Mario Mole fic on the site and I think this is almost as good as, although not as popular as, krisetchers's stories. Keep up the good work.
Bronzern chapter 41 . 8/9/2013
Now I can't wait for the spoof, also Moley you did put Flona name twice in the Vivian being the Mole paragraph instead of Lily who is missing.
Princess Toady chapter 40 . 8/8/2013
I'm so impressed and speechless... I only managed to find the most obvious one and interpret it correctly, I completely missed most of the clues and disregarded the ones that piqued my interest.

So good job ! It was really a good story and I'm glad you updated it so quickly towards the end !

And really nice ending, what with Steven opening the Moley Koopa restaurant. Really clever !
Bronzern chapter 40 . 8/8/2013
Moley, you did a very good job on hiding the clues. I barely find any.
Guest chapter 38 . 8/4/2013
Happy Birthday Moley!
Princess Toady chapter 39 . 8/6/2013
You know, I think it's great how during certain episodes Steven had a harder time sabotaging than in others. I mean, the Mole, as good as they are, can't always foresee certain turn of events. It reminds me of a challenge in my own Mole Story, when the Mole was at the haunted mansion and tried by three times to make the team lose money, but failed at every attempt. XD

I didn't know Steven had sabotaged so much money, though ! And clever sabotage on the raft constructing challenge !

Thanks for the quick update !
Bronzern chapter 39 . 8/6/2013
I cant believe that Monty was so kind that he gave Parker a free car and Steven 123000 coins!
Bronzern chapter 38 . 8/4/2013
Happy late birthday Moley!
Princess Toady chapter 38 . 8/4/2013
I like it that Steven wasn't an exceptional Mole but did a good job, because usually when people use self-inserts in stories, they are often pictured as Mary Sues or Gary Tsus depending on their gender. I believe Steven was a good Mole, his last act with the journal had me fooled until I noticed the last clue you put in the story, and I think that, even though he was spotted by many players, he was still able to go undetected by the viewers.

I cannot believe I was dumb enough to dismiss his sabotage on the racetrack. :facepalm:

Please finish this story soon, I really think you should make it your first priority because you don't have much to do to give it an end. Well, I also want to know what are the sabotages / clues / and perhaps how you will handle the parody chapter (I think you told me you were going to make one lol)
Princess Toady chapter 37 . 8/4/2013
I was sure I had left you a review for this chapter but I apparently didn't... So what I'm going to say is pretty obvious :

YUS LILY WON SHE WAS THE BEST !

She was a strong suspect of mine throughout the story but also a huge favorite and if it hadn't been for the last clue, I think her strategy could have led me astray from the Mole's true identity.
Bronzern chapter 37 . 6/10/2013
Lily was too crazy about money!
AdmiralBobbery chapter 2 . 4/17/2013
I'm Sorry! The fic that I've been reading from you is Tricky Enemy, I was wondering why I couldn't remember anything from this story...so yeah I've never read this one, but I'm staying strong with Jenny and Lily!
AdmiralBobbery chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
I like the intro! Short, but nice. I've already this fic all the way through but I have decided to perform a re-read with reviews this time!

I read this about a few months ago, so I can't remember who the mole is, but my suspicions lay with Jenny and Lily.
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