This solidifies my love for this ship even more, thx for writing this! I like how you maneuvered your ship without having to wreck the other, while pointing out the strength of Haru and how she was a good fit for Tsuna, kudos to that!

O my goodness.:s

great story! i understood what Iemitsu was doing, trying to protect Nana from the mafia, but i thought it would be best if he told the truth. loved the oneshot! i like how you compared Haru to Kyoko without bashing her.

I really liked the way you compared Haru and Kyoko and explained why Tsuna didn't marry Kyoko.

I don't really mind Tsuna x Kyoko very much as long as it's not the focus of the story but I'm not a big fan of it. I like Tsuna x non-mary-sue-OC, R27, 1827 and 2796 :)

nice

Awwwww

i really liked the way you described haru's charachter in this fic. thank you for this great piece of art

I always thought it was creepy that Tsuna liked someone who seemed so similar to his mother. I mean it might be because she's not really fleshed out but Kyoko not only sort of looks like Nana, but she seems like the same sort of person too. Tsuna isn't his father and I don't think he'd care for that comparison either. -end rant-
So yes, thank you for showing the difference between them in such a tasteful way. The interaction flows naturally and it's just people being people. Iemitsu isn't the devil or anything, only a man. And like all men, his decisions will not always be the best.
I also liked how you illustrated the difference between Haru and Kyoko and what it says about Tsuna.

This was well done and very interesting! Great job!

-Charmy

It's awesome! Thanks for sharing!

Nice one! This was a great quick read that shows why Haru rocks.

WAOW! Oya oya... so smart, desu! X3
"Why did he choose Haru over Kyoko?" Well... for some reason, i knew why. But i still gulty with my answer. Since it's like an answer from someone who chose Tsuna/Haru than Tsuna/Kyoko. And since i choose both, it's kinda hard. I even think Tsuna should polygamy if he can't chose just 1 girl/woman in his life! XDD LOL

Let me love this fic!

I really like the thought process behind this piece, I love fiction that surprises me and makes me think in a different way so great work.

Really cute story. I love how Tsuna's father realizes why Tsuna married Haru. I think u did a great job comparing and contrasting all three women (Nana, Haru, Kyoko). Lol Reborn was awesome.

I really like this. I was a bit hesitant to click on it because I thought it was another bash fic (I do like bash fics, but only every now and then). And it was never Tsuna's style - even with his dad - to purposely make others feel bad.
The portrayal of Tsuna and Haru was wonderful too. You made them seem in character for what they would most likely be like in the future. The whole Kyoko and Haru question was approached well too. The answer... wow. I would've never thought about it as one of the reasons as to why Tsuna would marry Haru over Kyoko.

Excellent story,
Cloud E.