Sooooo beautiful

Hi! What a song choice… I literally named my penname after that song! There is this part where the lyrics go 'and I am short on words knowing what's occurred' and I loved that phrase so much...

So far my babbling, back to the actual chapter: I truly liked it… It had all these emotions and that lingering angst, not to mention good writing. I definitely approve of your writing! :) Do you plan on writing more emotional one-shots? :) Anyhow thanks for writing.

P.S.: you have one of the most poetic pennames on this site, it’s lovely.

Awesome! Love it! You made that scene 100% better and I had already loved it. Thanks for writing! Karen

Excellent one shot.

Very good one-shot. I believe Damon would have been the better choice. I feel in the end she will eventually be with Damon rather then Stefan.
Maureen

I think you need to complete what you started. The story has such potential. If you watched the show from last night S04E03 The Rager, you will see what I mean. Elena as a Vampire is coming to understand she needs Damon. I have no idea where they will go with this and I seriously don't care. Your story is more on target then perhaps even you realize. So might I suggest you forget the show for now and run with what you have. Either way understand I loved the story. It had it's moments, just enough of a tease to leave the reader wanting more. While you chose the song Ungodly Hour _ The Fray, in my mind I hear Shining Light - Annie Lennox. It just seems to fit I will listen to Ungodly Hour though to see why that is your choice. Okay I read, enjoyed and shared my thoughts. (smirks) My work here is done...Ghost!

THAT my friend was orgasmic. hahaha very lovely, and hot! lovely and hot go so good together in fact I'd marry...both xD I'm freaky like that. Nonetheless, adored it. truly perfection! 3

OMG! I just LOVE it! It's the scene the Delena fans have been waiting for! Now they just need to make it! But it is great. Amazing 3

I'm not sure if this was a one shot, but I really hoe not! Continue, continue :)

I love that the show can make a scene that lasts less than a minute, and yet it still inspires so many of us to write our fics to fill in the blanks and see all the different points of view and imagine what happened after the screen faded to Caroline and Tyler.

How I wish this was what happened. That scene had me so wound up about delena, I needed to read this x). This is awesome. Keep up the good word xD.

Awwww... is all my brain can make. Should've ended this way, definitely!

he brings me wine? lol that was the funniest thing.

Fabbb

Wow. That was awesome! That is how the scene should have gone, great visual wwriting in the blood sharing part