Reviews for Prototype
rye chapter 1 . 11/28/2015
OH MY GOSH PLEEEEEASE WRITE MORE!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
This is perfect X3
migguy-24 chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
This is really good!
Mizu chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
this made me have a good laugh on a bad day... please write more!
Kira the cat chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
Is there more for this? I'm curious now. (bounces excitedly.) for a prototype this was really great.
Ivy Jane Backer chapter 1 . 11/6/2012
Your grammar needs work but otherwise an interesting story.
Eternalsleep17 chapter 1 . 10/26/2012
This is really good! I hope you continue it. :3
CutieZ Writer chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
so you guys are drunk...eh...
but you two seems to enjoy O
Vampire Revan chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
you should continue this; it's getting pretty good.

please write more.