You know, there's something entirely alluring about the way you write. The method of syntax you use just captivates me on so many level's - the way it seem short, yet they sentences still flow together. And the juxtaposition of sentences/descriptions as well... marvelous.

Okay, back to the plot, it's certainly intriguing. Especially since I know there IS a sequel. But if I didn't know, I'd be torn to ask for a continuation or simply be happy with leaving it as a one-shot. A pretty dang good one-shot to boot. If you haven't read my own, 'The Gaining of Heterochromatism', then you'd see how I like to leave open ending as well.

So... yeah. I guess that's kind of useless, ne?

Alright, onto the next story!

- Syra

That was an amazing story! It would be nice to see a second chapter! I really liked how you made us wait until the end to find out her prayers; it added a bit of mystery to the whole thing. I kept reading, trying to figure out what she was praying for... It was really good!

Really well written and the story is sooo cute!

Please do a sequel :D I enjoyed the blossoming romance as subtle as it was. I also enjoyed seeing the prayers in the end XD

cute story!

I was planning on getting around to reading this and now I finally have and just ADFGHJKL ISEKI I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THIS. Just, oh my gosh this was such an amzing one shot and I was inwardly fangirling the whole way through. I'm sure you know how much I love the Harvest goddess and nataurally my love radiates toward Ignis also and you seriously NAILED his character. Just... wow. Amazing. And his attitude toward Akari was perfect, with his severe superiority complex and immortal attitude. He certainly represents the stern, hardened gods seen in different mythologies, and you just did a fantastic job writing him into that position. And the way Akari was characterized was also so wonderful, with her dedication and especially the way she would "punish" him I found very amusing.

I also found the part with the goddess tree to be very creative, almost as though she was saving her energy for the Harvest King because the goddess already cares for her. Or something like that.

All in all, this is one of my favorite one shots I have read on this site by far, and now I shall go read the sequel to it!

-A.J.

It's sooo cute! I never really got the chance to talk to the Harvest King much myself, but he seems so godly to me!
The gods seem pretty interesting to me, and I would be quite interested if you intend on writing a sequel to this. However, the only complaint I have about people falling in love with deities is that the god would always live longer than the human. Forever alone. It's saaaaad D:
And by the way, I love Akari's prayer. She knows he loves cocktails, huh? xD

Spectacular writing! You've done an excellent job characterizing both Molly and Ignis! I really love the dynamic between the two of them because of how well their polar personalities mesh so well when they interact. Superb, just superb! You've done such an incredible job with this pairing. :) I would most definitely be interested in reading more about these two. :)

It was . . . amazing. Keep up the good work and have an ever so pleasant day.

AWAHH! This was such a well-written, cute story. I'd love to read a second chapter if you're serious on writing one!

I loved this! Your writing is beautiful, keep up the good work!

And again, I have been amazed by your spectacular writing! You should be quite proud of yourself because I've always felt like the King was kind of a jerk but this changed my opinion! He was a little prideful, but not to the point of utter meaness. -if that's a word- The only thing, though, is that I'm pretty sure that you go in the mines to get to the summit. I might be wrong. Anyways splendid work. :)

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