Reviews for Just Relax |
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anonymous chapter 1 . 1/10/2014 More. |
Savvy0417 chapter 1 . 3/15/2013 This story was so sweet and romantic! Shadow is so sweet in the story! :) |
TheFireGodaiFS chapter 1 . 2/4/2013 Good job, great job, do more. Awesome story |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/15/2012 awwwwwwwwwww :3 |
Rirureddo chapter 1 . 11/16/2012 Wow! Truly an amazing job! It's been a good while since I've read a great Shadow/Rouge story and this was without a doubt a really great one! The interrogation scene was really well done, as well as Rouge and Shadow's personalities! They were in perfect character and that made it even better! Really great job and thank you very much for such an awesome read! Keep up the great work! :D |
Kotetsu Bushido chapter 1 . 11/10/2012 You only have 4 reviews!? THE INJUSTICE! Well, I've reviewed, so that makes five. Now, onto my review. That was simply amazing. In the interrogation, you made it seem like she was less injured than she actually was, minus the ear pull. Other than that, I had no problems with this story. You kept them in character, which sadly, some authors don't care about. I could see that both Shadow and Rouge cared about it, but neither would come to tell the other, due to Rouge's pride, and Shadow's pride and "loner-ness" (don't really have a better word for it). You also gave implied that Rouge and Shadow have known each other for awhile. I don't know if you intended for that, or if you did it subconciously, but it fit in beautifully with the story. Definitely a favorite. |
Serina S chapter 1 . 10/30/2012 This is wonderful! You should get more reviews! ;) |
Sara chapter 1 . 10/20/2012 So cute! This deserves more reviews! I love how at the end Shadow nervously patted Rouge's shoulder because he didn't know what to think of the situation. You do a good job of keeping them in character :) |
Ann chapter 1 . 10/19/2012 How nice of Shadow ! Keep on writing ! :) |
Gloomy Shadows chapter 1 . 10/19/2012 Very nicely done one shot-shot. Extremely in-character and greatly written. Also very cute story-line. I enjoyed reading this one-shot. Very cute. |