This was amazing! You got their personalities just right. Can't wait to read more things from you!

oh my god! percabeth in tartarus stories are usually so depressing and dark and angsty (which i LOVE of course lol) but holy crap! you wrote this in a way that captured the fear and the realness of their emotions but still retained their sense of dark humor, which i guess they'd have to have after years of shitty things happening constantly. all in all i LOVE this fic so much! your characterization of both percy and annabet is flawless and i can't wait to read more of your fics :)

"Might as well make the damn thing official!" -Percy Jackson awwwwwwwe that is so sweet and cute! I love this story! I really hope that you make a second part!

This is so sweet! I nearly cried laughing so hard!

awwwwww
loooovveee it
omg u r so good at percabeth stories prplemyth
i mean like really

I am crying,smiling, laughing, screaming, and dying

I should report your fan fiction story... For being awesome... lol im joking but its seriously amazing.

Awesome!

I was honestly a bit sick to the stomach by all those angsty fics about Annabeth's and Percy's time in tartarus, so this was like balm to the soul. I just loved how they stayed all in character even while falling down Tartarus

Please update! And I love the story:)

That was the(one of the) cutest things I've read. They were in character unlike a ton of fanfiction. Good job!

Even its actually sad, that they were in Tartarus - What was Rick thinking? - , your story is cute. I love it!

I really liked this you should make this a chapter story.

awww so cute and sad and depressing all the same time...*sigh*

This is amazing, I didn't think I'd be able to cope after Mark of Athena, but now I've got this idea in my head I might just last a little longer. You're a brilliant writer, please write more! xx

This was really well done. It was cute, but not too fluffy that it started to make me cringe. It would be interesting to see a follow up, either as another chatper or as another one-shot. I would especially like to see how everything turns out once they get out of Tartarus.