I really hope you continue this soon it's one of my favorites to read

I'm totally in love! Your Hiei is absolutely perfect! Please continue soon.

Wow, that's a plot twist O_O
hope you update soon

Please for all that is good update !

So far I'm really liking this story and I really want to know what happens next, so don't abandon it (if you ever thought of doing so)! As for suggestions, I'm not sure... What had you originally planned for this story?

Hm... Well, for me to give a suggestion, I'd have to think about it a little. And to think of a satisfactory idea I'd have to know what it is you would like for this story and what you don't like. Just something to help me get better ideas. So... I'm not sure what to suggest at this point. I'll have to ponder on it.

Well, thank you for the chapter and I hope you can update soon. Until the next time we chat! :D

Or maybe this yakumo is one of naraku's incarnations, hence the spider scar. A imitation of some sort to the real thing? Maybe what was left of naraku trapped in the jewel attached itself to something with yakumo's blood or something personal and that is why he took that form. And in the process gained some of his abilities , like when naraku would absorb youkai to gain their strength... Idk on that one...

the spirit world is in chaos. Enma is nowhere to be found, koenma is in chains, and it seems naraku has nearly gained control. With the tainted shikon jewel he is controlling the ogres. Maybe that helps.. Sorry my reviews are all over the place and have horrible grammar I'm trying to do this on my phone. Not easy.

Naraku saw yakumo in koenma's memories and took his form to throw everyone off, he didn't realize boton would escape let alone see the spider scar and warn others. When kagome and hiei come through the well, naraku (or some of his minions) had a trap set for them to take kagome. Whether or not it works is up to you. Meanwhile the spirit required is in cassis

I'm not sure how many reviews you got in for the story they give you ideas but perhaps naraku was trapped inside the jewel and that's why It was poisoning kagome. When they tried to get the jewel out of kagome they released him into koenma, which is why koenma wanted kagome and hiei separated. Naraku, still inside the jewel, drew from koenma's power as a demi God til her had enough to take on a physical firm once more

This has been one hell of a sequel. Nothing is as it seems. I enjoyed how Hiei got to find out more about his family and meet his father. I was hooked from the beginning. I can't wait for everyone to see Kagome and Hiei. What will happen when they find out that Hiko isn't dead? Please keep up the good work and update soon. :P

"Mother once said to me many moons ago,
a youkai hand will defend
Mother once said to me there is more that you must know,
a mortal hand will sustain
Two hands together incomplete alone
Balance in union and the way will open."

third and last lines wrong- should be"Father said one day there is more that you must know" and "balance in union and the gate will open"

NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU! Naraku is back?! It would figure too huh?

This is an amazing story. I enjoyed reading it very much. I hope that I can read more of it.

You absolutely MUST update and finish this story! Its one of the few good crossover fics I've had the pleasure of reading! I seriously need to know how Hiei and Kagome end up and everything else too! One of the greatest crossover plot lines I've come across! Love it!

Thanks for a great story arch. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.