Uh... You do know that succubus can mean sex demon?

Hehe. (/_) Of course Gil won. He's just so awesome like that. XP

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combining pokemon with hetalia was just too awesome! :D
keep up the good work!

Well written and nice and long, too. :) Good job!

lol Russia so strong without ever trying. I feel sorry for Silver's hand. XD

Awww! X3 Yay! Canada matters! XD

X'DD Nice! Although, there are two sentences at the beginning that I think might have glitched... What's his Aerodactyl's name?

Geez. Brutal. Poor Kiku. *hugs him*

Hehe. Adorable and well written. X3

lol Very well done! When I got to what Prussia answered, I literally had to stop reading for, like, 30 seconds while I laughed. X'DD

lol Couldn't stop laughing. XD Nicely done. _

lol Very good. A few grammar mistakes, but nothing too bad. Also and excellent start, although a bit short. All in all, a good chapter. (/_)