So cool story but its kinda hard to read since everything is so bunched up together.

OMG...love it ...PMS

you seriously need more paragraphs

I would so take a punch for Spencer. Even though Spencer doesn't remember Ashley she remembers the kiss. If that kiss if everything they say it is then that's all they'll need to find each other again.

lol this has my interest. i think that if you spaced it out it would be better for everyone who was reading the story.

What an intro. Seriously why hasn't anyone told Ashley about Spencer?
Was Spencer like a wallflower at school, surely someone must have noticed her absence apart from Ashley.
I think things are just starting to get interesting and I am looking forward to reading more.