Loved it!

Yo this is so beautifuly written, I love it!

Y

A good idea to use for creators this could really working seeing the characters reach their young adult post puberty years seeing the characters at a whole knew perspective developers should consider the characters development in terms of age as it would set new heights for the series we will be able to look at them at a much different and new perspective the script is great glued to it for hours but could have avoided the cliche love story it is not the series nature its a comedy but mostly focuses on the mockery of daily American society next script try sticking to the series roots example heuy and jazzmine gerting married and dating that goes with Cindy and Riley I give it 8.9/10

im sorry but could you be more realistic here, like a kindergardener really know all those words?

omg I LOVE THAT SONG!

bitch this is good ya no ima look out 4 fade into you

abigal a bitch and kissy face huey and jasmine

This is a great story but I'm going to DIE before you get to the romance! Plz hurry XD

So I want to start with I love this story it's nice you did have some misspelling or typeos but I still could figure out what you were trying to say. I usually just review everything at once so let me start with Alex being gay. I don't think we can call a 5 year old gay just yet I mean I understand u wanted to point that out for the story but it was weird how Huey or Jaz told him he was gay since he's 5. he can't have a concept of his sexuality just yet I mean some little girls like boy toys but no one calls them a dike when there five ( this Is what I believe). and another thing Abby was using a very strong language for a 5 yearold. I think if Alex and Abby where 11 or older it would have worked out better but then they could have not been Tom's kids. Another thing I forgot what chapter this was but u made Jaz wright a letter to her mom but then the rest of the chapters felt like she forgot her. Even I forgot about Sarah until chapter ten when Huey mentions Jaz middle name. But like I said this was a hella good story and I'm glad you finished it I hate when good story's don't get updated or finished.

Okay first of all I friggin love oh lawrddddd this story had me crackin up and had me on the edge of my seat... I was literally hooked. Secondly I love how jazzy loves kpop and that she got accepted in seoul you must like Koreans or something lol (me too!) I thoroughly enjoyed this sorry, loved Huey In this. Wanted to choke Michelle lol fantastic story. Looking forward to the sequel!
언양! Meaning bye in Korean! _

BEST STORY EVER!

Amazing story

Ahhhhhh why no letthem kiss?¿?!

"She was finally mines"
Ruined the whole chapter for me