I love the hiyoukai wedding ritual you created! Totosai as Hiei's grandfather is a delightful touch, too :)

I NEED to know how this one ends!

Absolutely love.

Gahhhh! To be continued?! Soooooo much suspense ! Great story by the way

Can't wait to see what happens next

As short and sweet as this all was... I can't help but feel that their happiness may not last forever. What will Hiei say when he does find out that Kagome will be taken from him? I wonder if Hiei will tell Yukina that he's her brother? I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work. :P

LOVED THIS!

you have to update this is an awesome story

That was a great fic... I'm glad you didn't make her this all powerful being like so many of these cross-over fics do. I look forward to the sequel...which I'll be reading right after I'm done posting this review LOL

noooo more more more please more i want more pretty please

Quite frankly, I'm really surprised this story hasn't gotten as much attention that it deserves. Not only was it well written but also your plot was unique and left me guessing. This story is amazing.

oh so awesome its sad though how happiness is always followed by tragedy

great story!

ooooooooooooh! How could you left it like that? This is such an awesome story, I totally Love it. I'm so reading the next part. Keep up the great work ;)

oh dear that sounds rather like a threat