This was a really lovely depiction of their relationship... mutual understanding allowing for warts and fluff all at once. Lots of great lines too!

this is cute

Love this...I love how you described their relationship, and I love that even with their faults, that they're still together, trying to make it work, cause they belong together, belong to each other...

I liked how you dealt with their issues without them actually talking them out... it was realistic for them. I also liked the ending... so very Logan.

Aw, cute one-shot of Logan & Veronica. Interesting that the future Logan has blown through all that money, a formerly-rich Logan, I can see that. Great opening line too. Lot's of good lines in here. You said a lot in less than 2,000 words. Good job.