That's dark! I like the theme, one can't always save the day

You said you wanted constructive criticism...
I'm not sure how scary you wanted that to be but it was rated M so I'm guessing pretty scary? The story should have been longer, I felt like it was a bit rushed. All my fav insanity stories are multiple chapters and really give you a good look inside their head. Also I wanted to say that despite that I enjoyed your story and loved the puppet idea! Lots of potential as a writer you have!

Wow, this is very emotional indeed. You conveyed Courage's despair very well. Got to try harder to ruin my childhood though :)

Best story I've read so far that is written by a 14-year old girl.