I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE! NICE!

*snickers to myself*

so cute but shazzv should die

so very cute

U cant leave it like this! Really hope u update soon

This is a great start to a sequel if you decide to one. I hope to see what the kids do to Toombs. Rally enjoyed the original story and hope you decide to continue this snippet.

I do love your stories! I adore Riddick and Harry pairings and yours was one I instantly fell in love with! Please write another one? You mentioned Toombs which leaves off the possibility of another and I'm keeping my fingers crossed because I can imagine toombs coming in only to be beaten by Riddick's kids!

I would love to see you post more on this. I loved the original fic and would be curious if Harry would take care of Toombs before he could hurt Riddick or his family. Or maybe Blake would make good on his promise.

not bad, will the be more?

nice start if you decide to do a sequel.

huh? This is nowhere near finished, just a snippet of their lives, unfinished at that. Pls update and expand? Puppy eyes