Did I like their relationship? Did I hate it? Did I even understand it? This story made me question everything (and love it).

I am so confused lmao but also loving it. There are so many flaws in the story but I love that Tom keeps pointing them out, which...makes them not flaws I guess?

Very promising, but I really wish it wasn't written in first person. Idk why that bothers me; maybe because I feel like all the HP characters are real people and need to be in third person lol. Hopefully I can get over it enough to enjoy the rest of the story.

Whelp I have a take home exam today and I stayed up till 7am this morning reading it cuz I couldn’t put it down. I hope you’re happy hahaha

I'm sorry, but I really don't like how weak Hermione is. She lied to Bellatrix, and she did it well. I don't know where you got this perception of incapability.

OoF. THiS Is WHaT BeinG fUCKed MEaNS

I love this story. I almost never read Tom/Hermione fics for a whole host of reasons. But this has convinced me to reconsider the ship when things are done right. Was Hermione the strong willful heroine throughout that I usually enjoy? No. But you made it work! You created two fascinating and real characters who played off each other perfectly.
Also your lemons were a real treat. Some of the best I've read.

So Hermioone came from 1996. 1995/1996 is her fifth year and 1996/1997 her sixth year. Is she a sixth year, then?

lol yep pretty much

8 years on and this story is still amazing! thank you

Like, I have read so many stories where teenagers take over the world, but Hermione and Tom are just positioned to take over the world. And, that ending. This angst. That goodbye.

Reading the first note: Ohmigod what are they gonna do?
Reading the last note: Ohmigod what did they do!?

I am really feeling this Hermione though! She had been broken down and war-hardened to be reborn this way and ohmigod (I say that a lot, I know).

My head is reeling keeping up with these betrayals. All these Slytherins are more extra than their later counter parts, ohmigawddddddddd

Hermione is about to end the Malfoy line right here, ohmigod. I would have ended the Malfoy line right here. Like honestly. The tension in this fic is SO GOOD! Like, Hermione is really testing her mettle!

YOOOO I did not see that coming! Like, honestly, most fic writers just hop-skip over the repercussions of unprotected sex, but like, ohmigod! The Granger-Riddle baby will take over the known universe!

Again, the devolution of Hermione's character into this feral creature is interesting to read. And in no way romanticizing it, it is so interesting to read just because I've been in this fandom since I was twelve and Hermione has always been the moral, level-headed character, but who really knows how she would react in this situation.