Oh, my.

Welp, finally finished it. Good story! Keep improving your writing!

‘Later, the five of them found themselves in what looked like a giant shepherd,’...

What is a shepherd in this instance? Did you mean something else?

So... lotta dead police, and multiple student abductions... can’t wait to see the fallout from this.

There’s a few things wrong with this chapter, but it’s mainly the grammar and spelling. Have you considered having a editor or proofreader look over your chapters?

... why would you break into the school with acid? That just makes it more suspicious. If you just cut wires, and break the locks quietly, then they would have no reason to suspect anyone but a random thief. Common thief’s don’t use ACID.

Knowing that she wouldn’t have to wait for long

Not would

Molt, not Mold

Sooo...what happened with lily? Did we just move on past that and hope nothing bad comes from it? The story just... doesn’t say what happened after they put her on the wall.

...he slapped her? Wha...I get that your going for dramatic effect, but that’s a bit too much.

He was unconscious, not inconcious

Can Kane really call her a youngster when they are the same age?

Change hopefully to thankfully, when he gets caught after falling.

Big issue, you don’t give any indication of when someone stops talking.

Instead of writing, -Are you fine with this? he asked after a few minutes.

It should be “Are you fine with this?” He asked after a few minutes.

Or even -Are your fine with this?- He asked after a few minutes.

The guy has the strength to punch a tree down but gets his rear whooped by some high school reject? And doesn't sense the other aliens nearby like he used to? I thought he would be stronger and smarter than the average human. Now he just seems to be less intelligent and more fragile. Also does the majority of his school have some form of psychological issue? I was very irritated with this chapter.