Oooh! Am not happy that Stu got away Scott free but you can't have everything! Really enjoyed it x

I truly and unreservedly hope that Stuart meets the most grisly sticky end imaginable!

Blimey, there's more twists and turns in this story than any maze! Its keeping me on the edge of my seat! Would love to know how you come up with such an intricate story. Excellent, can't sleep till Chapter 38

aw sweetie! Thanks for the acknowledgement at the end - the pleasure was all mine.

Wow. What a ride that was. I'm only sorry that real life has been such a pain that I have not managed to read and catch up with part four of this amazing story sooner (I was a bit busy with serious 5, then grieving, and then work) but I wanted a special 'ME time' to enjoy the end of your story and to do it justice. Today was that day. And wow - just WOW!

For me, this was such a treat. It was like having an entire other series of Being Human following Series 4 and before Series 5. And it was magnificent.

Along the way, I've left a few comments of my immediate reaction to what I was thinking or feeling at the time. Hindsight is a wonderful thing, and I know that you were probably rushing to finish your story before Series 5 started - I didn't always feel as though I could keep up with the changes in characters telling the story for each chapter and some of the plot lines that were set up. As a Reader, I felt that you needed to anchor this a bit more - I spent some chapters wondering what on earth was gong on and feeling a bit lost and confused. I've given that some thought and I am aware that- 'well, that is exactly what happens when we watch a series of Being Human' We stagger away, feeling dazed and confused and asking ourselves - "What the Hell Just Happened there?" And then we spend an entire week trying to make sense out of it.
I hope you realize the compliment I am paying you here.

Stand out moments for me were: all the dialogue of Alex - I think this is the best I've seen to be honest. And I loved your Tom. And Hatch! And a fleeting moment when Hal kissed Belinda/Alex THUD! Some beautiful writing in the dialogues, with such quirky 'Being Human-ish' one-off-lines' that I could actually quote a few and think that they were actually from an ep of Being Human (which would be embarrassing for me and a total rush for you, I know!)

From your profile I see that you are a professional writer. I don't know what you write or for whom you write. I don't know if you write for 'The Racing Times' or you are a successful novelist, write boring academic dry books on plankton for some University somewhere in the North Sea.. or write reviews on cookery programmes. But if you haven't already had a go at creating a new script for TV (and there are plenty of opportunities to do so right now if you are following The Writers' Room Blog on the BBC) then I think you should if you don't mind me saying so.

The quality of your creativity, the boldness of the execution of your plot-lines coupled with good dialogue and wonderful descriptive content was intrinsically what I enjoyed most about this story.

And absolute joy.

Thank you

MancVamp

Am. In. Bits.

*sobs* Truly beautiful. Truly amazing. Astounding.

Crikey! Okay, that was just weird. Weird in-a-good-way-sorta-weird. Bloody Brilliant Being Human Weird.

Tom and Hal - got sommat in my eye...

OMG!

Woah... That was a LOT to cram in in one chapter! I can't keep up and definitely feel as though I've lost the plot here. But it is all so thrilling!

The descriptive content in this chapter was just breath-taking.

Arthur! MyHeartIsPoundingInMyChest!

Brilliant chapter! I love Stuart! Now please rescue my Hal from this HELL!

Wow that bit at the end is brilliant considering how the show ended! I think you're psychic.

The road is looooooooooong! Hmm hmmmmm hmm hmmmmmm hmm hmmm!

You know I hate you right? Getting all these songs stuck in my head.

Phew! Just reached the end of part 3 of your story, so just to say how much I am enjoying it. Some of the best dialogue I have ever read.
Where this story is going - I have noooo idea! Looking forward to Part 4.

OMG. Just OH. MY. GOD! There was no way I could stop reading those last 3 chapters to say anything. crying, smiling, a bit dizzy (I think I forgot to breathe) I had to walk away to calm down before I came back to say something. That was an incredible ride! Just WOW!