More soon pease :3

More soon please :3

iThe smug look in Amy Rose's eyes as she had won without even doing a thing./i

That LAST line killed me XD This story may be lots of fun.

I like

Gotta say, that was pretty darn good. All the characters were in character and that twist at end tho. Well done, looking foward to more!

Is this going to be sonadow?

I'm really sad that this has been neglected for so long. Please find it within yourself to continue!

I think the story is going well so far, you did Shadow's personality very well and the rest but... you could of made it alot longer then this, it just seem a little rushed but not too much.

Other then that I can't wait to read more! I'm curious if Knuckles is ok D:

You are doing really good so far. There's nothing bad I can say for this story right now, though. Just make sure you stay with the plot. :)

Great story! I'm really enjoying it so far.
I can't really think of many negatives. The positives are: I really like the turn the story has taken, it's getting me very interested, and that there are hardly any spelling errors. I also really like your writing style.

Hope you will update again soon!

Wow, I like this! :) Your style of writing is quite admirable. I'll be looking forwards to more! Update soon.

Awesome please continue :)

This is pretty cool! never saw anyone try this plot :3
Sonic must be really stressed now D: poor guy...

Very suspenseful.

This had me smiling. After reading the summary I was wondering how Sonic would ever get around to marring Amy if he didn't want to. The curse is a brilliant way to make this happen.

Your use of spelling and grammar is correct and there is a wonderful range of vocabulary. For a first story, this is very good. Surely you've written before.