I'm pretty sure the slug kid's name was Kevin, not Derek...

okay, the unfinished patronus storyline is driving me crazy now

...so Snape cast the patronus? That's...unsatisfying. The whole point of the dementor's storyline is lost. But I will just keep reading because you've proved again and again that you tie ends masterfully.

I'm confused, is Harry in Slytherin or Gryffondor?

Maybe it is 'you will wish you had never been born' instead of 'you will wish I had never been born'?
hahaha but this was funnier this way

Falls weeping. At least you gave us Hermione back.

The rest, is sorrow.

(though Snape somehow forgot the part where he risked his life and spied for the better part of a year to keep Harriet's mother safe, not to mention that Dumbledore said, "What will you pay me?" to protect the Potters. And you know Dumbledore won't say a word).

Oh, this is so hard, and it's all for the Greater Good, isn't it. But Harriet cares about Snape in a way that, actually, nobody has ever done in his life. (I mean, we know that none of the canon characters really cared if he lived or died, right?).

You show us both characters' agony so well.

I absolutely adore this fic. There are no words to describe how much i love it. But i can't help but laugh when I think of the absolute FIT severus is going to have when Harriet gets put in the Triwizard Tournament.

This Asteria - Harry friendship is ever so sweet!
And I love that you seem to love some of my favorite authors (Gibran, Heyer), I think I already said so before.

I loved the attention to some of the mother's of Harry Potter 3

Well I haven‘t written for a while because you story held me on a death grip...so no time to share my thoughts.
It’s amazing how well you spin the plot and are able to draw each character. I seriously, dearly hope Remus survives and gets a chance with Sirius, all the rest will work out, I trust you there, just with that little bit I am not sure what you have in store...
Well on I read.

Snape believes he's going to his death anyway, what's a little bit of love got to do with it?

Everything.

Wow. Incredible chapter, glad you deviated the way you did from canon. Harriet was incredible, and I hope Snape is allowed a noisy half hour with Fake Moody, if only for Dobby's sake.

Still loving everything you write.
And I love that you love Gibran.

Hi, I am rather late at discovering your story.
Thank you for writing it! I enjoy your style, your twist on the characters and plotline and little jokes very much and can‘t quite stop reading...well, on to the next chapter.