Wow. This is so powerful. God has given you a seriously awesome gift of writing!

Beautiful!

All four seemed a bit too... mature in this. As in "a couple years older than they should be" sort of mature. And Lucy quoted Aslan word for word and that kind of bothered me somehow, probably because it was just that perfect of a quotation. And, personal opinion, Ed's pendant should have been mentioned over Peter's, considering that this should be a little more his story than that of the others'.
However.
The message was good. And I liked the incorporation of Willow's runes. I was wondering where they'd come from and then that chip appeared. :-)

Ariel_of_Narnia

"...Despair and wonder, guilt and freedom.". Indeed, those are the things that hit the heart when remembering the Stone Table.

Aww, so nice that Lucy is the one to quotes Aslan.

Indeed, His love knows no bounds.

God bless you, and happy Vaneltine's Day!

I LOVED THIS! This is one of my FAVORITE stories! I almost started crying because it should have been me facing my sins not Jesus! He did something that i should have done and i am SOOO thankful for Him and what He's done for me! I thank you for writing this & I pray blessing over you for putting this on here! You are an amazing writer! You show that He loves us more then anything & show that we can do nothing but through Him & His love! Thank you!

:-D I loved it! - Grace and Peace to you through our Lord Jesus Christ, Amen.

This was beautiful. I really loved the way you highlighted the importance of Aslan in our life, and how we are all the traitors that He died for. And the runes from WillowDryad's story were perfect. :)

Beautiful...

"His and not my own" . . . His and not our own. His strength and not our own. His love and not our own. His wisdom and not our own. His grace and not our own. Truer words could not have been said... or written, you say? :) This piece had more than meaning or lesson. It had the picture and story of the Faith that these four siblings had in Aslan. And one that we all should have in the One who gave His life for us, and saved us with His unconditional love, as well.

Oh, dear Narniagirl, may God bless you more and more for writing these wonderful fics, and please continue to do so, so that you may inspire many more readers like me through them!

"But after night, comes morning. And after darkness, comes light."... Indeed, Peter's words are truer than true. And the proof of His love is greater than anything else in this world. Again, thank you so much for writing this! I enjoyed it too, even more for the fact that I do remember that whispered conversation between the two girls, and have wondered myself what happened after that; if Peter, and most of all, Edmund himself, had ever seen the Stone Table broken in two, therefore finding out about what took place there at the night before the Battle. Keep writing, and God bless you!

Wonderful so much so I the saying you used 'His and not my own.' sent me to look at some saying I PM them to you.

This came from the heart and I loved it. Well done.

Another great story! What a lovely snapshot. This totally fits with canon, and I can imagine it in the movie too :-)

It's freezing cold where I am at the moment, but this made me feel all warm and protected.

I wish more authors in this fandom understood that Aslan is the center of Narnia, and the whole thing falls apart without Him. Your stories, and those of other talented folks like Willow Dryad, are gems among the Narnia fandom. I hope visiters to the archive, weary of Sue-fics and bad AU, will read this and feel their hope renewed.

Keep writing!

GwF

I love this! I thought it was from the For Kimg and Country song, which I love! Did u see the official music video? It's awesome look it up! Write more song-fics like this

Wow Ngirl. That was amazing. I love those songs! Those should've been stains that were never washed.
Thank you. It changed my day.

"It should have been me."

That says everything right there. Lovely.

Thanks for putting in the bit from my story. :)