K now that’s gonna get fun

I've always wanted an alternative ending to inheritance. You nailed it! This concept about raw power that you made is incredible! Thanks for this fanfic. stay safe

An excellent read. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Check on the way to spell words that sound the same but are spelt differently and mean different things, such as ‘site’ and ‘sight’ early on in your story, and a number of other occasions when similar but different words occur.
Do keep writing, you have talent, and believe me, I have read thousands of books in my time, as well as having written articles myself, so I know what talent looks like.

Oh! Very, very original and good idea! I like it!

What is this power ? The Eldunarí? or another thing? good fic

Kyra and the homeslices A and E vs army of general shades and Razaac armies

your are god of among gods when it comes to writing. I will be rereading this many times and hope i can become as good as you one day with my own fan fictions and novels. Thank you so much for writing this it was amaaaaaazing!
Phoenix

This is an amazing fic! Please write other stories!

Thank you for writing such a good story and really making my nights enjoyable while I read this amazing story. It is really good and I hope your own personal novel ends up just as good.

Thank you for this story, epic scenes and just overall great ending

Hey, can't remember if I've already reviewed this... If I have, then I certainly don't mind doing it again, and if I haven't, I can only beg forgiveness as this is now my third time reading your story :/ but onto the review...
From chapter 1 when this started out as 'the Real death of a king' (which by the way set my younger mind buzzing with possibilities of where this could go), I have loved your storyline and development of the characters. I came back to your story as I am once again rereading the IC, and coming to the end it all seems a bit less dramatic than last time...
It seems I have you to thank for low-balling the final battle of Inheritance for me... however I more than happy of this, and it is a genuine thanks Im pass onto you. So to wrap this drivvle up:
Thank you for sharing your blood-pumpingly exciting, seriously gripping and heart-warming take on the REAL death of the mad King ;)

I just read your fic , very good EXCELLENT , I enjoyed reading was a pleasure reading you're parabens.

Thanks for dc effort to write something so fantastic.

If the text is a confusing poco , sorry but using google translator . For I am Brazilian speak Portuguese , I could read your fic thanks to Google translation .

Incredible conclusion :p and incredibly satisfying. Thank you.

Hey, thank you so much for writing this. Awesome escape from the wider world. It was good to see some hope :)

I admit it. I like this better than the cannon ending.