Alright now a battle will start epic. Wow you rock dude keep it up I'm dyingg to see what happens next bravo.

Awesome! Nothing is better for cutting vines than a machete! Loved it! Blaze was awesome as always!

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Man, second time this story Blaze has had to tackle someone! But they must beware the forest! Great chapter! Keep 'em comin'!

That escape very epic chapter. Now what's in the woods I wonder are they going to save Luna soon I hope so the torment she went through excellent job on this chapter bravo.

Oh Blaze, look what you've gotten yourself into now. Anyways, great chapter! I love how everything is all chaotic! I'm in the same boat as you as far as finals go! Keep it up!

Due to your request, I decided to say something: Cool, Scripture just about the way I imagined him... Thanks for using him, peace out!

Man this is so scary now wind is locked up. This is so intense an excellent job on this chapter I can't wait fir the next chapter keep it up bravo.

That was awesome getting better and better I love it excellent job on the writing and plot bravo.

C'mon Blaze it's kinda like BBQ. Also, I can't stop imagining the Major General calling people cocksuckers now! Good chapter! I'm ready for some action! Keep it up!

Where did he get his weapons? Did he just randomly magic them too him? What was the point of asking that question twice? He said he was ready the first time. You should explained there was more the one jeep it was rather confusing. I also don't get the point of the Major General having the map. He has no idea where they are, Wind should of had the map and an open flame in enemy territory is a very bad idea.

Sorry if I'm coming off as a major douche. I'm sleepy and tend to be mean when I am. It's not a bad story, it just leaves a lot to be desired

I doubt a Pegasus could carry both a 50 cal sniper and a bar.

More questions. How did they get the weapons. What's the point of taking up the task of replacing the spies if Celestia and her army knows they have or had spies in it. Seems rather stupid to me

Why does this story sound like something taken from the sniper movies.

It's not a bad beginning. But, there is room to improve. Nothing has been explained. Such as, how were the spies caught, when and why is Celestia slipping into insanity, where is Luna, how do the ponies shoot the weapons and does this even take place during the normal time period of the show?

It's a spy! Well, I'm tired from football so I won't point out any mistakes. There weren't many anyway! Good chapter! Can't wait for some more action and Luna! Keep it up!

Great chapter I enjoyed you have done an excellent job chapter keep up the great writing bravo.