Oh, this is so adorable. Totally going to read your longer story now. :)

Awww I love reading Jily one shots :)

Aw, that was cute :)

i loved it! absolutly adorable..loved the double entendre lol

LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT!

i think there may or may not be a few little areas where there are spelling errors and such, can't think off the top of my head, but yeah.

JAMES WAS CAPTURED NEARLY PERFECTLY. he was too perfect, in other words. I would have liked it if he had gotten the rune completely and utterly wrong, in my personal opinion.

But still, AWESOME.

Lily was maybe a teensy too flirtatious, but still, GREAT CAPTURE-EY-NESS

if you have any questions, i'd love to help!

-Evanna

Good idea but you should have written in the past tense. Your writing in the present doesnt flow as well.

That was too cute. Loved it.

Okay that was cute.