Hi. Are you going to update any time soon?
I loved all the story and eager to read the next chapter.
Please, keep up with the good writing.

P.S. I've read through different writing styles and yours is one of my favourites.

UUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPDDDDDDDDAAAAAATTTTTEEEEE YOU LWFT IT ON A CLIFF HANGER FOR YEARS MAN SO NOT COOL PLEASE UPDATE THIS BEG OF YOU

Continue the story pleeeease.

Hi, I'm reading here and I'm finding it pretty good.
I've just come out with a theory of why the Sith are so cruel: on the time of the Republic and the Jedi Knights, they had to work in a guerilla mode, doing small terrorism and etc but now they are the leaders of the Empire and they must adapt to the situation, not leading thousands of soldiers to their deaths. Jay and possibly his Overseer are the only ones prepared to this but the rest of the Sith may lead the Empire to its ruin.

I like your descriptions, I think they are enough to describe the scenario and keep a fluid reading. Also it helps having various encounters between characters to describe them or their situation a little bit further.

That's all for now, keep the good writing.

Please update this it's so good

Love it

I hope you will return to this story soon, I am itching to see what Jay has had specially made

Ah! I need more!

No his force powers are good. The Sith Warrior was a prodigy in light sabers and force powers actually. So it makes sense what your doing. Love the story by the way. Jay the Sassmaster

This character, SI I mean, fails to adapt quite badly. There's a clean line between shock, and acting as one would as if they lived in a Western nation on Earth. To put it simply, such an idiot stands out too much, as one whom simply does not conform to the Sith Empire norms and values. A target for all.

It sounds like your planning to outfit Jay with lightsaber gauntlets. I'm a little disappointed that Jay never learned to overcome his weakness with a lightsaber. However, I suppose lightsaber gauntlets are cool, trying to go for that wolverine vibe I see.

I think at some point Jay should grow more comfortable with using a saber. As he grows to see it as an extension of his body and technique rather than a hindrance. Even in un-armed karate many of the techniques used could be extended to a weapon. In fact, there are even blocks called sword hand block and knife and block which can easily be transferred to a sword. Also, you've written Jay's fighting style as being variable and adaptive, as he applies many techniques from different styles to make his own fighting style. Why wouldn't he try learning how to use his sword? Those are additional techniques which will only aid him further in a fight. Lastly, while Jay is already cool without his saber techniques, he would be an undeniable badass with them. These are my two cents regarding Jay not using a saber.

Also, I'd be happy to help if you want any ideas regarding other SWTOR classes. I've played all of the class stories through and am currently writing a SWTOR fanfiction of my own. I would love it if you were to take a look at my story and give me a review.

You should continue this, it's amazing

I came across this when I was randomly searching for something to read and I think you should continue with this story. I would like to see how Jay would interact with other characters like The Hand and the Voice. Keep up the good work.

Keep up the good work!